Impenetrable

nikspix
Author: nikspix
Word Count: 42
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When I look at you and you don’t look back,
When I speak to you and you don’t respond,
When I reach for you and you back away,
When I fall asleep and awake alone:
This is darkness. Impenetrable darkness.

Impenetrable

My version of darkness.

  • AngelArtist

    AngelArtist, 7 months ago

    Excellent work Nikki

  • nikspix

    nikspix, 7 months ago

    Thanks, Angel :)

  • Mister

    Mister, 7 months ago

    Cool.

  • RedEarth

    RedEarth, 7 months ago

    Hey, I like this one. It’s concise, it’s different, and its easy to identify with. I think everyone has felt like that at some point…

  • katphoto

    katphoto, 7 months ago

    very nice

  • Maya Farrow

    Maya Farrow, about 1 month ago

    wow

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