she looked at me with tear stained eyes,
her feelings rolling like the gentle waves,
she felt she could no longer touch her heart,
her emptiness like a broken vessel in the dark,
she wiped her eyes my reflections shining back,
her nakedness like a goddess sharing all,
she touched my cheek, fingers feeling deep,
her soul imparted to a place so dark,
she let her feelings run and glide to me,
her strength diminished as the souls entwined.
he felt her inner turmoil sliding in,
him a man who felt all that he could,
he let her take him by the heart and hand,
him who built tall walls from deep within,
he felt his resolve evaporate like boiling steam,
him a constant block of frozen ice,
he let his soul float upon the clouds,
him a disbeliever in anything more,
she taught him well, he learned to understand,
they finally transcended into one.
ufosIsee
7th line down from top, did you mean cheek or check… However it was still brillant… Passionate and a great read.
Nigel Aves replied
Very nice catch on “Cheek” :) ... I always knew I needed a good editor :)
ufosIsee
Your welcome.. Love your writing man…