A Place Called Lust

Strident Sounding, Pussy Pounding,
Drip Despair upon your Bust.
Frenzid Fumbling can be Humbling,
Take me to that Place Called Lust.
Stifled Swearing, that you’re Tearing,
from the Power of this Thrust.
Pushing Faster for Disaster,
Mixing Gin with Angel Dust.
Random Jolts, Engender Volts,
Nasty Nookie is a Must.
Keep you here, Darling Dear,
Handcuffs Worn until they Rust.
Stand Defeated, i’m Completed,
Gory Games of Dark Mistrust.

(Copyright (©) 2008. All rights reserved)


Max Gatrell

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  • Care
    Careover 3 years ago

    oh my Max…that is quite the verbal experiment ; )

  • Cheers Care,
    a little twisted I admit,
    but we always have to try ;)-

    M

    – Max Gatrell

  • LittleHelen
    LittleHelenover 3 years ago

    Nice work Max :D

  • Many Thanks :D

    M

    – Max Gatrell

  • sandraellen
    sandraellenover 3 years ago

    max, just love how you throw a curved ball into the mix—“nookie”, from olde english speak?

  • I wasn’t aware they used ‘Nookie’ back then,
    I just know it from everyday Use :)-

    M

    – Max Gatrell

  • entity
    entityover 3 years ago

    indeed a masterpiece Max

  • Cheers Lisa,
    I don’t know about a Masterpiece,
    but it’s wonderful to hear ;)

    M

    – Max Gatrell

  • mychaelalchemy
    mychaelalchemyover 3 years ago

    bravo!
    another gem to add to your chain
    speaking of which should be worth the price of entry
    into that Place of Lust
    that kinky is the key
    to break the montony
    to explore the frolic and form
    of what should be, and, really, often is the so-called norm.

  • Many Thanks Mychael,
    in A Place called Lust,
    you’d be a Dignitary ;)

    M

    – Max Gatrell

  • Rielle
    Rielleover 3 years ago

    Who told u about last night hmmmm?

  • If I wrote down about last night,
    i’d be banned from writing anything again ;)-

    M

    – Max Gatrell

  • Gregory John O'Flaherty
    Gregory John O...over 3 years ago

    Another good one Max

  • Cheers Greg,
    so glad you appreciate,
    my humble musings ;)

    M

    – Max Gatrell

  • mychaelalchemy
    mychaelalchemyover 3 years ago

    lol, a Dignitary…I like that..a person of high esteem or rank…however, in my usual fashion, playing adversary, having met some Dignitaries before in person, they are pretty full of themselves and self-important while looking down on others…I have met priests and even ambassadors of state and other countries and I must say dignitaries, for the most part are wretched…However, I wouldn’t pull rank if I were one myself…haha, I might yank on other things though…

  • SirenSong
    SirenSongover 3 years ago

    very cool!!

  • Many thanks ;)
    But don’t wreck my Boat (lol)
    M

    – Max Gatrell

  • msclairesunday
    msclairesundayover 3 years ago

    heh, love it

  • Cheers :D

    M

    – Max Gatrell