Escaping the Flood of Bodily Fluids,
Rituals Profane, Fucking like Druids.
Wax Searing Skin, Cuffs on my Wrist,
‘want it in there? well if you insist’
Tongues Exploration, Digits in Holes,
Dancing with Death, Collection of Souls.
Raptureous Moans, an Ecstatic Din,
Devouring Flesh is Never a Sin!
Kinky Attire, Leather and Lace,
Nipples Revered, Breasts in my Face.
Hands around Members, Harpies are here,
Tough to Decide, Front or the Rear?
Cum on the Ceiling, Blood on the Floor,
after 10 hours i’m Screaming ‘No More!’
A Turn for the Worse, out come the Whips,
Wailing my body, like Mutated Lips.
Excitement Abates, everyone’s Spent,
let’s got to Church, it’s time to Repent!
(Copyright (©) 2008. All rights reserved)
Opulent Orgies
On a Naughtier Note…
ManaMoon, 2 months ago
Have you been playing in Sodom and Gamorahs playground lately ?Naughty naughty
Sally Omar, 2 months ago
Max, A very humorous writing!!!! Love the last two lines…Sally xxooo
Jen Wahl, 2 months ago
You ARE naughty! lol. Excellent erotic escape from reality…. a welcome treat on any day.
Max Gatrell in reply to Jen Wahl’s comment, 2 months ago
LOL I can be naughty ;)-
I was just feeling playful today,
sometimes this sort of writing
can be rather cathartic.
M
Max Gatrell in reply to ManaMoon’s comment, 2 months ago
LOL Mana, last I heard it was destroyed ;)-
gotta be naught naughty occasionally!
M
Max Gatrell in reply to Sally Omar’s comment, 2 months ago
Cheers Sally, sorry it was a tad obscene for ‘Bits and Pieces’
I should really consider what i’m submitting before I do so ;)
M
mychaelalchemy, 2 months ago
seems to me you already know the true church and how to worship there :))
I don’t believe one needs to repent was is holy already, some think sex is sacred and in their thinking, it is to be only one way, within a certain context only…
but, sex is divine for humans because there is added the gift for pleasure and exploration…
kneel down between another’s legs is being at the altar of the other….
nothing is more profound than that…
i would assume you know the original concept of the orgia before the Romans got hold of it and just made it profane….?
dogpriest, 2 months ago
LOL, “lets go to church,
it’s time to repent”
excellent mate, well done, ya dirty bastard, lol
dogpriest
Max Gatrell in reply to mychaelalchemy’s comment, 2 months ago
Hey Mychael, I see no reason to repent for satisfy perfectly natural needs, it was just a way to end this piece, the way I see it. we’re here so the Higher may experience itself on the Lower planes, sex was invented in Heaven and the Like, remember what Solomon said, about there being nothing new under the Sun, all we’re doing is reinacting old plays with new tongues (lol)
M
P.S. you’ll have to enlighten me on the Orgia thing ;)
Max Gatrell in reply to dogpriest’s comment, 2 months ago
LOL glad you liked it, yeah this poem’s kinda nasty, but tastefully executed all the same :)-
M
P.S. if you think this is bad, check out ‘Wet Patch’
dogpriest, 2 months ago
shit i see it already,”Wet Patch”, i could only imagine, lol. I’ll check it out mate.
dogpriest
Max Gatrell in reply to Sally Omar’s comment, 2 months ago
P.S. i’m curious Sally, what do I have to do to become a featured member on your group?
Max Gatrell in reply to dogpriest’s comment, 2 months ago
LOL it is rather obscene ;)-
dogpriest, 2 months ago
rather funny, me thinks,lol
dogpriest
mychaelalchemy, 2 months ago
I could be wrong, but I believe it was Ecclesiastes that saying came from…but, true. as above so below in more ways than most would even think about….
I am in agreement that we are the experiencers… reading about something is knowing, but until you experience it takes on new meaning, if one believes in God in this light, even though God is All-knowing, the same applies, through his creation it takes on something more than merely knowing of something than actuall knowing what it is like to expeeirence it..we are to do just that and once done, theOne thing can re-unite….
The orgia actually came about when groups of women would meet secretly under the moon to perform ritual, they would gather in energy to themselves to purify, or to give them greater benefits in their tasks…sometimes, it involved sexual orgasm, not necessarily with one another, but, is it probable that also occurred….sometimes they were seen with broomsticks by spies, you might say…the broomstick between their legs, hence the notion of witches and broomsticks, their ecstasy very much akin to the concept of flying….mostly, they simply danced themselves into a frenzy….eventually they invited their husbands or select men into their circles. the balance of energy in order to be in accord with the world itself, to insure fertility of the crops,etc….
Then, later, the Romans secularized it and it became debauched hedonism, hence, many pagans were also called hedonists…The Romans were pagans before they found Christianity, as anyone knows, but the Romans were also conquerors and brutes, since many Romans were enlisted into the Army and were then declared Romans, too…....
the orgia lost its original intent, the magickal raising or drawing to the very energy all was created from…
LittleHelen, 2 months ago
Excellent! :D
Max Gatrell in reply to LittleHelen’s comment, 2 months ago
Cheers Helen ;)
M
Rielle, 2 months ago
Brilliant…..I expect an invitation next time….lol
Max Gatrell in reply to Rielle’s comment, 2 months ago
Cheers Rielle, Invite’s in the Post :)-
M
abeigh, 2 months ago
Lordy, do you throw some wild parties. Ax
Max Gatrell in reply to abeigh’s comment, 2 months ago
i’ve been known to ;)-
M x
butchart, 2 months ago
i like the rythm you chose for this.. it moves along like an impassioned sex encounter…..even at that level of detachment some spirituality can be found… in the act itself…. a return to our animalisitic desires…....... what is more spiritual than that…......... good read…...........b
Max Gatrell in reply to butchart’s comment, 2 months ago
Thankyou B, glad you could see beyond the obvious obscenity,
with this piece, I was striving for raw emotion, something evocative,
that would appeal to our beastly side, or not, either way a reaction (hopefully) would ensue ;)
M
butchart, 2 months ago
you achived your goal….for me anyways…...........b
Max Gatrell in reply to butchart’s comment, 2 months ago
Cheers B, you’re too kind ;)
M
Damian, 2 months ago
LOL, now that paints some images!
Max Gatrell in reply to Damian’s comment, 2 months ago
But maybe not one you’d like to retain (lol)
M
LisaB entity, 2 months ago
haha …. funny stuff , so well written !!
dimarie, 2 months ago
i love how your writing reads…like a song….
Max Gatrell in reply to LisaB entity’s comment, 2 months ago
Cheers Lisa, always glad to amuse ;)-
M
Max Gatrell in reply to dimarie’s comment, 2 months ago
Hey dimarie, thankyou so much,
your description of my work, is exactly
how I want it to appear ;)
M
Melissa Park, 2 months ago
Dirty…..........but really nice
Max Gatrell in reply to Melissa Park’s comment, 2 months ago
That’s fair enough to me (lol)
M
JenniferB, 2 months ago
You had me at the title… and then…
wow…
forgive me Father for I have sinned… and how many hail mary’s would that be?
I love the final two lines… They make me feel sooooooo much cleaner…. ;-)
Katewah, 2 months ago
wooo hoo!!! love it.
Max Gatrell in reply to Katewah’s comment, 2 months ago
Cheers Kate ;)-
M