Ribaldry Revelry

Max Gatrell
Author: Max Gatrell
Word Count: 56
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Ribaldry Revelry, Frolics and Fun,
Magnificent Mahem, Sordidly Spun.
Opulent Orgies, Despicably Dressed,
Hysterically Happy, Cravings Confessed.
Lascivious Laughter, Veraciously Vain,
Passing Personas, Subordinately Sane.
Tacitly Tense, Awkwadly Apt,
Ethics Expelled, Radiantly Rapt.
Quantively Quiet, Zestfully Zeal,
Jovially Jinxed, Working the Will.
Impishly Irksome, Blatantly Bland,
Nefariously Nude, Gloriously Grand.

(Copyright (©) 2008. All rights reserved)

  • AmyX

    AmyX, 2 months ago

    Great Writing my friend!

    amyx

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar, 2 months ago

    Max, Absolutely love it…what fantastic rhythm…Hugs, Sally xxooo

  • Max Gatrell

    Max Gatrell in reply to AmyX’s comment, 2 months ago

    Cheers Amy :)
    how’s the writing going?

    M

  • Max Gatrell

    Max Gatrell in reply to Sally Omar’s comment, 2 months ago

    Thanks Sally, i’m in a playful mood today :)-

    M

  • dogpriest

    dogpriest, 2 months ago

    once again, you have a swallowed a dictionary,lol, and made an excellent piece, fucking fantastic mate, extremely well written!

    dogpriest

  • Butterflies And Bullets

    Butterflies An..., 2 months ago

    hey why you writtin about my mania ? ! just kidding

    clever! i like and will fave right after i push reply!

  • Jen Wahl

    Jen Wahl, 2 months ago

    Fucking brilliant, Max.

  • Max Gatrell

    Max Gatrell in reply to dogpriest’s comment, 2 months ago

    Swallowed again? my dictionary is surgically attatched, cheers for reading mate, will reply to your last comments after dinner ;)

    M

  • Max Gatrell

    Max Gatrell in reply to Butterflies And Bullets’s comment, 2 months ago

    Hey there stranger! thanks for the fav, means a lot to make your hit list ;)-

    M

  • Max Gatrell

    Max Gatrell in reply to Jen Wahl’s comment, 2 months ago

    Cheers Jen, your comments never fail to overwhelm me :)

    M

  • Amber Elizabeth Fromm

    Amber Elizabet..., 2 months ago

    Hello there Max wonderful writing I love this stuff light satircal and very well written
    have a terrific DaY M:)

  • ManaMoon

    ManaMoon, 2 months ago

    Masterfully manipulated melodious musings Mr Max

  • Max Gatrell

    Max Gatrell in reply to Amber Elizabeth Fromm’s comment, 2 months ago

    Thankyou so much Amber (nice to see you by the way)
    this was me being playful, glad you enjoyed it ;)

    M

  • Max Gatrell

    Max Gatrell in reply to ManaMoon’s comment, 2 months ago

    Cheers Mana, love all those uses of M (lol)

    M

  • Amber Elizabeth Fromm

    Amber Elizabet..., 2 months ago

    always have you checked out my art collaborations ??? some are pretty cool been missing my buddy M:)

  • Max Gatrell

    Max Gatrell in reply to Amber Elizabeth Fromm’s comment, 2 months ago

    So far I haven’t had the pleasure, is there any you could direct me to? missed you too Amber ;)

    M

  • Amber Elizabeth Fromm

    Amber Elizabet..., 2 months ago

    probably start Stolen Child and think Illusions perhaps principle and pride have a new recovery piece am working on too come see and a few pieces Like Standing In the Whispers well come visit let me know love your opinion

  • Max Gatrell

    Max Gatrell in reply to Sally Omar’s comment, 2 months ago

    Thanks for the feature Sally,
    means a lot ;)

    M

  • abeigh

    abeigh, 2 months ago

    Outstanding Max, excellent rythym as usual. Ax

  • Max Gatrell

    Max Gatrell in reply to abeigh’s comment, 2 months ago

    Cheers abeigh, it’s not a serious piece really,
    just playing with words and seeing where
    it lead me, glad you enjoyed ;)

    M x

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar, 2 months ago

    Max, It is a great piece!!!!! Hugs, Sally xxxooo

  • butchart

    butchart, 2 months ago

    you should play with words more often….you are adequately adept at analysing affectations among archaic abstract avenues…......b

  • Max Gatrell

    Max Gatrell in reply to butchart’s comment, 2 months ago

    Many thanks B,
    guess we all play when we can,
    sometimes the words themselves,
    beg to be arranged.

    M

  • LisaB  entity

    LisaB entity, 2 months ago

    nefariously nude LOL … lordy i love that ,
    cud just b my epitah !! xxx

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