Alchemy Blue
The Cup and Wand initiate Themselves,
into the Chalice sinks Stalwart Stave.
Two Halves Annexed, like Yin and Yang,
Canticles of Pleasure Fill the Air,
Dances Delightful, Stick to one Spot.
Vicariousness is utterly Discarded,
For this Experience Angels Enjoy.
Vial’s are Absconded owing to Fricton,
Genies wish to be hence Returned.
Documents within Envelopes of Ecstasy,
Bullets Dispersed down Frenzid Brows.
Longevity of Rapture, Relative to intensity,
The Mutual Flutter, ostensibly Perpetual,
After much Heat, the Mercury Flows.
Elements Collide, Water and Flame,
Feelings Sublime, Transcend Mortal Planes.
Marvels are made, Great Work Complete,
Union yields the Alchemists Gold.
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Comments
Amazing writing Max…
amyx
Thanks Amy ;)-
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– Max Gatrell
Beautifully expressed
Much Appreciated.
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Oh this is cool…thank you so much Max :D
xx
Hope it wasn’t too obscure ;)
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– Max Gatrell
Longevity of Rapture, Relative to intensity,
The Mutual Flutter, ostensibly Perpetual,
After much Heat, the Mercury Flows.
Oh… Maxy… What an incredibly, stimulating piece of writing… would it be too corny of me to tell you how beautifully and freely it all… flows? such wonderfully explosive words of soft, creamy liquidity… ;-P
Not corny atall Jen, it’s always a Joy to hear your work’s ‘gone down’ well 8)-
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– Max Gatrell
Oh… you’re so right Max, frequently my word does indeed go down, but tonight it has truly been soaring high on an upward thrust… :-P
For this Experience Angels Enjoy
You have been in wonderful form, continue..Ax
Thanks Abeigh, i’ll certainly do my best ;)-
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– Max Gatrell
Bullets Dispersed down Frenzid Brows.
love it! you are really turnig out words of blissful electricity…. no exception this!
Cheers Laurie, I tried to make this as Alchemical as possible, whilst making allusions to erotica, glad you enjoyed ;)-
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Max, Awesome…a fav!!!!!! SAlly xxoo
Thanks Sally, always honoured to be on your list ;)-
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– Max Gatrell