Apple

Max Gatrell
Author: Max Gatrell
Word Count: 7
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Bite the Apple, taste Beautiful sin.

Apple

  • deliriousgirl

    deliriousgirl, 2 months ago

    Bite my ass, taste sweet flesh.

  • deliriousgirl

    deliriousgirl, 2 months ago

    Jeeeeeeze, now you’ve got me addicted and I’m channeling jb!

  • JenniferB

    JenniferB, 2 months ago

    You got Mail, suck My twat! ;-)

  • JenniferB

    JenniferB, 2 months ago

    lol deliriousgirl… If there was anyone who could continue my dirty lil ole reputation with such profound proficiency, why, I couldn’t possibly think of anyone more disgustingly perfect than you hun. ;-)

    xox

  • Max Gatrell

    Max Gatrell in reply to deliriousgirl’s comment, 2 months ago

    That’s a turn on DG (lol) sexier than Jen me thinks ;)

    M

  • Max Gatrell

    Max Gatrell in reply to JenniferB’s comment, 2 months ago

    I don’t know what it is, I submit a perfectly innocent piece and it invites all manner ludeness. I need to find a more serious site. ;)

    M

  • JenniferB

    JenniferB, 2 months ago

    Max… fuck off! There, I said the F word, are ya satisfied????

  • Max Gatrell

    Max Gatrell in reply to JenniferB’s comment, 2 months ago

    Never satisfied Jen, therein lies the problem Bitch ;)

    M

  • JenniferB

    JenniferB, 2 months ago

    hmmm… I have a little, parting ‘gift’ cumming to you… and all those who are like you… ;-)

    xox

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar, 2 months ago

    Max, Went to favs…love it!!!!! Sally xxoo

  • Max Gatrell

    Max Gatrell in reply to Sally Omar’s comment, 2 months ago

    Thanks Sally, so glad you like this one. By any chance have you tried your hand at these 6 word things?

    M

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar, 2 months ago

    No, Max, I have not…but may give it a try…very interesting concept…so few words….so much
    meaning….Sally xxoo

  • Max Gatrell

    Max Gatrell in reply to Sally Omar’s comment, 2 months ago

    That’s what I mean. One could compare regular poems to oil paintings, and these 6 word stories to a scetch. Both are beautiful to look at in their own way.

    Have a go, see what you can come up with ;)

    M

  • natapee

    natapee, 2 months ago

    oh I’m really getting into these. wicked words.

  • Max Gatrell

    Max Gatrell in reply to natapee’s comment, 2 months ago

    They’re so much fun to write, like a tiny fix of creative expression ;)

    M

  • Laurie McClave

    Laurie McClave, 2 months ago

    heres your 6 words…. bite this

  • Laurie McClave

    Laurie McClave, 2 months ago

    actually there are words on this one… you just have to go look at the close up version to see them! he he he

  • April Mansilla

    April Mansilla, about 1 month ago

    love your words! this would make a rockin t-shirt :)

  • Max Gatrell

    Max Gatrell in reply to April Mansilla’s comment, about 1 month ago

    You’re welcome to put them on a T-Shirt.
    I just love writng these 6 word things, they’re very addictive, plus descriptive…you can say a lot when limted ;)

    M

  • jianina

    jianina, about 1 month ago

    Taste like candy :)

  • Max Gatrell

    Max Gatrell in reply to jianina’s comment, about 1 month ago

    Oh so sweet (lol)

    M

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