neliyeti


Come on -

Feeling low as i plow through the hypnotherapies of not smoking anymore –
pop into red bubble
noone said anything about story –
must be crap
oh well
back to the acu-tapping and pretending i’m not dying for one..

cough cough
puff puff

  • fleece

    fleece

    Most of the writers came and went with the unleashed07 competition…

  • kseriphyn

    kseriphyn

    I’m still here! Trying to read stories, but my attention span has been short of late. Let me check out your stuff.

  • Elaine van Dyk

    Elaine van Dyk

    I’m still here as well – just been very busy and over-tired to concentrate on reading a lot. I promise to read your story tonight!

  • Anne van Alkemade

    Anne van Alkemade

    Me too to Kseriphyn and Whirli!!!
    Don’t be disheartened by no comment.
    I reckon check back again after tonight. ;o)

  • RoseRed

    RoseRed

    I’m still here too…still writing, but student reports for the next month! Will write something for self when my brain is purged of assessment codes!

  • AnnH

    AnnH

    No it isn’t crap. I am half way through yesterday and got called away for problem and back again now on RB but can’t read until tonight. . I was certainly intrigued. What is the hole in the chest and the hairs? Seeya tomorrow.

  • neliyeti

    neliyeti

    hole in the chest – a touch of magic realism – i don’t think things are as straight forward as we define them each part of the characters represents another part of them which in turn leads to a step in the story that a word limit forbids further outline – or perhaps i need ot shrpen up my skills…. what do you want the hole to be? the hairs to show you?

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