"GUARDIAN ANGEL"

NCOFFEY2008
Author: NCOFFEY2008
Word Count: 168
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AN ANGELIC MESSENGER COMES TO ME FROM AFAR
A NEW AND TENDER VOICE ECHOS FROM THE STARS
AN ANGEL OF PURE BRILLIANCE SHINING LIKE A STAR
AND IN HER POWER BLESSINGS AND ON HER FACE A SCAR

I WONDER IF SHE GRANTS MY WISH
OR REJECTS MY HOPES AND DREAMS
I HOPE TO TOUCH HER HEART AND MORE
BUT HOPE ISNT WHAT IT SEEMS

ONCE INSIDE HER THOUGHTS AND PRAYERS
I BOW DOWN ON MY KNEES
TO PRAY TO BE THE ONE SHE CHOSE
TO RECEIVE HEAVENS DECREES

I RAISE MY HEAD TO LOOK AT HER
AND DARE TO PLEAD MY CASE
SHE MOTIONS ME TO RISE AND REACH
AND TOUCH HER ON HER FACE

HER SKIN SO SOFT AND SMOOTH UNTILL I FEEL HER SCAR
I ASK HER WILL IT BE OK AND SHE TELLS ME “ON TOMORROW”
A SCAR SO DEEP SHE PULLS AWAY AS IF THE CUT WAS NEW
I ASK HER WHO AND WHAT AND WHY
AND SHE ANSWERS “IT WAS FOR YOU”

"GUARDIAN ANGEL"

THIS POEM WAS WRITTEN AFTER A SERIES OF DREAMS THAT I HAD OVER THE LAST COUPLE OF MONTHS . MY DREAMS SEEM TO EXPOSE MY OWN CONFLICT OF RESPECTING AND PRAISING GODS MESSENGERS AND AT THE SAME TIME FALLING VICTIM TO MY HUMAN NATURE OF APPRECIATING THE BEAUTY OF A WOMEN OF ANGELIC FEATURES.

"GUARDIAN ANGEL" belongs to the following groups:

All Things Poetic, Prose, Philosophical. and Compassion, Courage & Friendship
  • jianina

    jianina, 4 months ago

    there is a lot to translate here and i love where you took this>>makes me reflect on myself and my placement>>

  • KEITH  R. WILLIAMS

    KEITH R. WILL..., 4 months ago

    this a pure masterpeice

  • NCOFFEY2008

    NCOFFEY2008, 4 months ago

    thank you mr . williams my friend . i appreciate the comment . i am honored. neil

  • Mel  Spittall

    Mel Spittall, 4 months ago

    Wow…this is truely amazing!

  • NCOFFEY2008

    NCOFFEY2008, 4 months ago

    thank you so much mel

  • Dani Louise Sharlot

    Dani Louise Sh..., 4 months ago

    Your poems are quite stunning, classically arranged with subtle catholic [not in the religion] literary forms. Very hedonistic, with beautiful rhymes too

  • NCOFFEY2008

    NCOFFEY2008, 3 months ago

    thank you so much. i am encouraged by your words. thank you

  • Angi Baker

    Angi Baker, 3 months ago

    Very nicely written, great work…

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