a self cleansing dichotomy

The angered predicament;
From an unfathomed embarrassment
To baptismal transformations,
And cleansing mitigations,
Splitting the body and soul,
Into non-intersecting parts of a whole.
Inner elements in bipartition,
A mutually exclusive reflection…
Of me…
in tacit dichotomy,
soul searching…
body, in earnest yearning…
of a purifying sabbatical,
And a rinsing meditation
For the naked truth,
To utter silent words to sooth;
To achieve an inner peace,
And hatred…to cease…

  • cougarfan

    cougarfan

    Beautiful:)))))))))))))))))

  • navybrat replied

    thanks my friend!

  • Christopher Birtwistle-Smith

    Christopher Bi...

    wow, jotham this is inspired! have a good break my friend…c

  • navybrat replied

    thanks Chris!!

  • margpie

    margpie

    fantastic words…very beautiful :)

  • cougarfan

    cougarfan

    You are welcome I know we just started to communicate, but I am drawn to your positive energy. And I usually do not do that. Thanks for comming back:))))))))))))
    xoxo
    Trena:)

  • Jo Hoden   "C'est la Vie"

    Jo Hoden "C'...

    gosh…..:)

  • Lisa Hewitt

    Lisa Hewitt

    Beautful words!! Is there anything that you can’t do to perfection?? HUGS!!!!!

  • Judi Taylor

    Judi Taylor

    You are writing from your soul … And it is beautiful!

  • valzart

    valzart

    O These are very beautiful soulful words writer ;} hugglez

  • liesbeth

    liesbeth

    words written through experience.. soultouching..

  • Linda  Syms

    Linda Syms

    Beautiful words.

  • Heather  Rivet  IPA

    Heather Rivet...

    well said..and a big hug

  • Paul  Stephen Dixon

    Paul Stephen ...

    Nice one Paul :))

  • Romo

    Romo

    Beautiful and very touching words my friend:)

  • Agnes McGuinness

    Agnes McGuinness

    Wow, brilliant and very moving writing, navybrat. Agnes:))

  • ariyahjoseph

    ariyahjoseph

    momentum

  • Joyce Dickens, IPA

    Joyce Dickens,...

    Superb writing and very effective; touches my heart and soul!

  • jennyfnf

    jennyfnf

    Peace to you too Jotham:-)

  • Shanina Conway

    Shanina Conway

    Inner peace…a good thing;)

  • Pat Moore

    Pat Moore

    Magnificent words with great inner feelings, well done my friend!!!

  • Keith Reesor

    Keith Reesor

    I see contemplation has brought a closure!!

  • jennyfnf

    jennyfnf

    Love our message Jotham. Peace and harmony:-)

  • Van Cordle

    Van Cordle

    Wonderful!!

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