dark desires
take part in my dark desires lol
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***♂♥♥QUORN♥♥♀, A New Aesthetic.... Divine and Otherwise , ABSTRACT DIGITAL ART AND WRITING, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Art Inspired by Dreams, Back In Black ( sorry~NO PHOTOGRAPHY), Blue Room, DaDa Land, Everyday Life, Live, Love, Dream: , Safe Haven, The Adult Group, The Sensual Word and WMGthey sit in the dark…
drowning passions stark,
a flame of secret dalliance…
hmm, a mischievous alliance…
in rhythmic cadence desires sly,
never to mind the where and why,
entangled in sweat and tears,
unafraid of tomorrow’s fears…
ecstatic to the moment’s oblivion,
with many a play to nirvana’s infatuation,
dark these desires may be,
but an ephemeral notion so heavenly….
such is a dark desire…
a blazing passion, playin’ with fire…
HeatherTS
i love tyhis piece…what’s interesting, is that there is so much talk about fire lately around here when it comes to lusting (for anything)
lol damn us, we just want to parch everything dont we :o)
navybrat replied
yes we do!!!
thanks butterflies!!!
linaji
wow you are playin with fire these days.. you are fire!!!
navybrat replied
shhhhhhh!!!!
Sally Omar
Fantastic!!!!!! Sally xxxooo
navybrat replied
Thanks Sal!!!
hugs,
J
Jolie
I heard that, I heard that!
You’re playing with fire
and doing it in a beautiful poetic way.
Beautifully written & presented no less!
navybrat replied
thanks J….appreciate it much!!
rayy
WOW. this is AMAZING. love your style and compilation. awesome piece my friend!!! xxoxoxxoxo
navybrat replied
glad you like it Rayy…
cheers!
lynauklet
I’m not sure how effective all the ellipses are.
MuscularTeeth
well worded … that conveyed much
navybrat replied
thanks M!!
Lisa Hewitt
Wow…..I loved this piece! It took my mind in several different directions but it made me swim with delight! Thank you!
navybrat replied
glad my work had that effect on ya!! thanks much!!
Miri
i love it! the art is writhing & the words passionate, great stuff!
navybrat replied
thanks much miri!! appreciate it much1
Jory33
very well written
navybrat replied
thanks Jory33
devotee1
“such is a dark desire…
a blazing passion, playin’ with fire…”
Love it! Great writing! But are we really playing? Or being played? Or all perpetrators playing victims of ourselves?
navybrat replied
works both ways dear….
thanks much my friend!!
Lisa Jewell
Love your wording….
There is something so intoxicating about the many faces of fire…..
Wonderful piece….
navybrat replied
thanks lisa
DevaDaDiva
thats beautiful. i loved it. good job.
navybrat replied
thanks sweetie!
Verangel
Great pair of writing & image!!! complement each other very well.. I liked the play of words. Very good! 8)))
navybrat replied
glad you like it!
sassie
It’s sort of atmospheric,satanic,and descriptive.I wish I could achieve as much with my poetry.
sassie
It’s sort of descritive, satanic and wierd.i wish i could achieve as much with my poetry.Judy Fleetwood-Walker
navybrat replied
in order to achieve it…..you must feel it…not force it!! and like art…just let it flow!!!
navybrat replied
in order to achieve it…..you must feel it…not force it!! and like art…just let it flow!!!
sally-ann rawl...
fantastic writing
navybrat replied
thanx much!
Melissa Park
What feeling!!! well written.
VelvetGirl
Fascinating stuff!!
Fair2se3
navybrat i was wondering if you get a chance to look at my stuff and give me an insight i really like your work and would love for you to tell me what you think thank you
bluemorpho
this is so inspiring
Flic Manning
Wonderful work here – loved it. Every word was placed so well and left a great message.
wastedtime
I found this disturbing writing, but realistic. the image speaks for itself
S Burns
Everyone has dark desires, but only few can transpose them into poetry. Fantastic job.
rahil lakhani
playing wid fire boy….
n yo prof pic is also good….
Rails
ToastedGhost
Wonderful play with words
& fire
solareclips~Ju...
navybrat replied
yup! been there for three weeks now!! thanks julie!
Anthony R. Pla...
Nice work J! Congratulations!
theelvenlady
wow…awesome ;) love it
thedivamuse
Evokes something wild on the inside!
dsslvdgrl
Wonderfully written, the mood of it all is rather sensual.
navybrat replied
glad to see a new face here!! welcome to RB and thanks for the flattering comment!
Devalyn Marshall
MMMMM! Just makes my imagination fly! Wonderful writing!
jomash
Wonderful, great rythm.
jomash
Wonderful, great rythm.
Vladimir Garci...
Hey! for real,marvelous work keep lighting up RB.
RedWriter
So good, I feel the burn! Great piece of work!
KEITH R. WILL...
brillant
LilyMunroe
Such lovely words, I think i know these depths well …..oh that desire, playing with fire…. exquisite writing :)
Matt Roberts
Great, and the image is… ‘interesting’.
wigs
I am so loving your writing….dark desires, playing with fire…. nice