Radiance
Kicking at a mound of sand, I drearily awaited the torrents of rain that would soon flood the beach.
So much for inspiration, I thought to myself.
The menacing dark clouds masking the sun were already driving people away by the dozen. Only one plain, invisible writer remained.
Hmmm. I really need a metaphor for myself
I glimpsed a transparent, misshapen, uncolored rock on the ground, forlorn and half-buried. I picked it up, dusting the sand away.
Perfect.
I watched the beam from the lighthouse across the harbor circle its way to where I stood.. A swatch of light brushed across my hand.
Split-second contact…..Instant rainbow.
Comments
Inspirational! I liked this, made me smile.
Thank you so much Peter. I’m glad that it did.
– Natella2020
What a lovely moment.and a real metaphor for your self.
That’s such a nice thing to say! Thank you so much.
– Natella2020
Wow! What a creative piece… love it! Welldone indeed.
JAK, Sumayyah. I’m glad you like it. The creativity sprung from the picture, hope you saw it.
– Natella2020
An inspirational moment indeed. Personally I would think about dropping the adjective “drearily” at the beginning, I think it sticks in the flow a little.
Thanks for reading and for your thought. I think that deleting the word would negatively affect the flow and the mood. Do you have any suggestions for a replacement?
– Natella2020
Wonderfully well written, God sending a message to the self doubter.
Thank you so much for reading, Hilary!
– Natella2020
So beautifully written,thank you for allowing us to be a small part of your vision :O)
You’re very welcome. Thank you both as well.
– Natella2020
You’re very welcome :O)
Beautiful imagery.
Thank you so very much.
– Natella2020
Well done Natella. This exercise has really worked for you big time. Liked the story on first read. Viewed the image and love the story on the second read. Really really there!!
Meant to mention I loved “Really need a metaphor for myself”. It’s so self conscious. LOL.
Thanks, Anne. I’m honored.
– Natella2020