watercolours of me

natapee
Author: natapee
Word Count: 85
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watercolours of me

A old scribble I found last night that have reworked this morning.

watercolours of me belongs to the following groups:

Creative, Talented, and Unknown, The Red Writing Room and Up & Coming Writers

My mind is dissolving
into a nebulous frame
there are too many spaces
between my thoughts
and too many thoughts
about this space
my feet are hovering over the earth
and my brain is living on the moon
my stomach floats between the planets
like orbital debris
there are no lines defining my body
mirrors reflect no distinct shape
I have no form
I am pastel pieces in this atmosphere
suspended and disconnected
and these lagging compulsions
and solvent vices
are making watercolours of me

  • Mark Ramstead

    Mark Ramstead

    This watercolor is a beautiful expression of all that you are.

  • natapee replied

    thank you that’s very kind.

  • Shoaib .

    Shoaib .

    beautifully written :)

  • natapee replied

    thanks Shoaib, good to see you round : )

  • MissMiller

    MissMiller

    As ever… BEAUTIFUL. x.

  • natapee replied

    thank you lovely, as always, means a lot.

  • ShadowDancer

    ShadowDancer

    natapee, funny how we come across things just at the right time.. this so describes the way i’ve been feeling today.. a very beautiful poem

  • natapee replied

    yes it’s funny how words find us sometimes. thank you for your comment. xx

  • Genevieve Robey

    Genevieve Robey

    Beautiful artistic imagery that is out of this world. Excellent work.

  • natapee replied

    thank you lovely, really appreciate your words : )

  • t-fourlee

    t-fourlee

    Thankyou *

  • natapee replied

    thanks for reading

  • briarlee r

    briarlee r

    Fantastic! You have a way of expressing undefinable emotions :)

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