the spiky peach

Author: natapee
Word Count: 58
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The title is a phrase coined by someone who I admire and love, who is wonderful at causing the best kind of trouble when needed x

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I’m a sharp tongue
and a cold face
metaled
don’t be fooled by
these warm lips
ruby
or the softness of
my
fingertips

I do not
slide
across a floor
I can not
be
pushed
like a pawn
towards
prey

I am a
spiky
peach
so perhaps
you ought
to be
just a
little bit
afraid

PJ Ryan

mmm juicy with succulence and the right amount of acid tongue. fabulous :)
natapee replied

thanks hun x
ArcadiaTempest

hmmm which tree can I pick you from :))) superb X
natapee replied

LOL. I didn’t think this would come across as sounding delectable, but as you wish… x
Kristin Reynolds

YES! my almost ex always said I was “prickly” (can you see me rolling my eyes?) but I’m sure it can’t all be not true. I’ve got some prickles, and i know how to use ‘em! nice one, girl. love, K :)
natapee replied

Sometimes we need our prickles to pop out from time to time. Doesn’t mean we’re ‘prickly’. x
sunsette15

Greatly interrpreted this lovely fruit can use its spikes..ouch! lol
natapee replied

thanks Sunsette.
sunsette15

your very welcome
natapee replied

thanks for adding me to your watchlist!
sunsette15

Your welcome, I like your work
Kevin McGeeney

great contrasted mental images, lots to think about! great work
natapee replied

thanks Kevin.
ArcadiaTempest

Well I do possess a peeler you know ;)