sew her some stars
featured in The beauty of poetry June 2009
featured in poetry and beautiful women June 2009
sew her some stars belongs to the following groups:
"Poetry and Beautiful Women" , Creative, Talented, and Unknown, The beauty of poetry and WMGShe wanted him to go
but she didn’t want him gone
she wondered how she might
breathe without his lungs inside her
she wanted to write with her
own hands again
but his name was still written
all over her fingers
she tried to leave him quietly
this time but she was unsure
whether she could disappear
when he was everywhere and
nowhere all the same
like the salt in her skin
or the atoms in the air
she knew he would
eventually go and one day
she’d wake up to an empty sky
she hoped it’d be empty only
because he’d sewn her
some stars into her heart
with silk before he was
gone for good
Astoreth
Beautifully painful. xxxx
natapee replied
xx
justwords
Most beautiful work
natapee replied
thanks so much
phantomlimb
Fantastic writing natapee….love it!!!
natapee replied
thanks muchly.
Genevieve Robey
oh this is so wonderful! beautiful and moving.
natapee replied
glad it moved you.
Lisa Jewell
I hope so too…..
tender and beautiful.
XXXX
natapee replied
thanks gorgeous. xx
mimi yoon
so beautifully written…
natapee replied
thank you
Louise. C. Thomas
I am so with you; every word. x
natapee replied
that makes me smile.
Elucidate
Beautifully written and butter-sweet.
natapee replied
bitter-sweet also? thank you xx
Holly Ringland
well.
this is just ridiculously beautiful. swoon comes to mind sweetheart… you’re making it impossible for me to stand by previous claims of finding my favourite piece of your collection. but i don’t care… keep going, keep writing, keep making it too hard to choose… because if i fill my arms with a bundle of your words and never love one more than the other, i’ll be gluttonously happy.
this really is sublime.
lazydaze
Beautiful work !
natapee replied
many thanks.
PJ Ryan
thumpity thump thump goes my heart .. this is beautiful nat x
natapee replied
i like making your heart thump : )
chelsea hotel
This is beautiful. I especially like the title.
natapee replied
thanks lovely, so nice of you to drop in xxx
Leda D
oh wow this amazing, love it!
natapee replied
thank you x
erika15
Wow beautiful poem…I loved every word of it. Such beautiful words
I love this part so much:
she hoped it’d be empty only
because he’d sewn her
some stars into her heart
with silk before he was
gone for good
Another favorite.
natapee replied
thank you honey! x
Hannah Fenton-...
This was just featured in
The beauty of poetry
natapee replied
wonderful thanks Hannah!
MrHill
great piece..when he was everywhere and
nowhere all the same… the haunting I know…....she was always there….
natapee replied
thank you
koby
aww, stop it. you make my eyes water.
natapee replied
oh ok, if you say so : ) xx
Songwriter
Poignant and painful. I could not stop reading it and I wanted to close my eyes. But it was too beautiful. Thank you. :0) Song
natapee replied
wow. thank you for that comment. that meant so very much.
Shoaib .
natapee replied
wow, that’s wonderful thank you!!! And thanks for adding me to your watchlist : )
AFogArty
Sweet work, love the closing lines.
Well done.
natapee replied
thanks so much
Kristin Reynolds
I love this. should everyone be so blessed as to feel that kind of love, just once, even if it has to go…Kristin
natapee replied
what a lovely thought, you’re exactly right. like they say, it’s better to love, than never love at all. if i’m being cliched and all for a moment.
Leda D
congrats on the feature – very deserving :) ox
natapee replied
thanks lovely. xx