After I realise your promise
of a sunflower meadow,
existing just over the hilltop,
is only a tease, I feel
flattened, like the trodden grass
beneath my red shoes.
Its difficult to keep these
slippers skipping along
humming to my internal song
optimistic,
these shadows cast
a long sigh,
but I keep on walking.
Beyond the bare meadow
I find something
unexpected,
rusted birdcages, a place
blooming, with weeds
there’s whispers
of spring picnics, once
delighted and tunes of
parrots, they dare to make
my leaves stand up
once more and hum.
Should I start with a cage,
uncover it,
let the life return, for
underneath this meadow
flowers may still bloom, the sun
is not yet shining, my love,
did you simply send me
to this place of promises
that bring, too soon?
Jessica Tremp
absolutely gorgeous…love the bird cages
natapee replied
thank you Jessica. I dreamt about the bird cages the other night, will write more about them soon me thinks.
PJ Ryan
how stunning ..
they dare to make
my leaves stand up
once more and hum
love that line so much
natapee replied
thanks PJ x
shaktipat
beautiful writing. i like the inquisitive, open-ended style.
natapee replied
reflecting my never ending quest, with so few answers!
markgb
Wonderful writing, I especially love the first verse.
natapee replied
thanks Mark
girlinthestars
i love this, completely. gorgeous!
natapee replied
xx
ufosIsee
Sometimes cages can be the trap, or waiting 4 glimmers of hope.
Well written like it alot..
natapee replied
thank you and I like those two interpretations could go either way!
ufosIsee
Ur welcome….....Looking 4ward 2 more of ur work soon.
VelvetGirl
I like the first bit, I often feel like that! t’s full of hidden meanings and I love it. x
LeaLoo
The last stanza is really pretty sounding.
natapee replied
thank you!