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N♥RIN    ISM♥IL
Author: N♥RIN ISM♥IL
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  • karldenton

    karldenton, 4 months ago

    Narin, I love this writing it really gets your ming thinking:

    “that seeks and drinks sex” …or… seeks to find the one, the one that when met will feel like you are part of them, as one. Sensing every inch of a body, form, texture, taste. The hear that seeks passion and desire, fulfillment of your beating heart, now what about his?

    Sorry to play with your writing but I must admit that is just took me away…

    Karl

  • Aveen Ismail

    Aveen Ismail, 4 months ago

    nice naro

  • Robert Dye

    Robert Dye, 4 months ago

    I enjoy the simplistic nature of this writing. It is curious and has ambivalence within it. Have you read a short story by Voltaire, that’s called, “Plato’s Dream”? I am currently working on an oil painting which has that title, and conveys the subject of a Soulmate… You will see it someday… Hope you take good care dear, stay in touch, Peace-

  • mister khan

    mister khan, 4 months ago

    seek heartful sex that beats drink and discovers fulfilment..

  • N♥RIN    ISM♥IL

    N♥RIN ISM♥IL, 4 months ago

    that’s another nice pc…. rabbitollah

  • Leon  Walker

    Leon Walker, 4 months ago

    So simple but very powerful!!! Nice work Lady!!!

  • N♥RIN    ISM♥IL

    N♥RIN ISM♥IL in reply to karldenton’s comment, 4 months ago

    lol…. thanks karl … i am glad you like it !!! your question…. now what about his??...well i have it all in under control…. lol

  • N♥RIN    ISM♥IL

    N♥RIN ISM♥IL in reply to Leon Walker’s comment, 4 months ago

    thanks leon…. i love it when writing is simple… beacause when its simple it is well said…..

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