As i was brought into life i was given a charm
A great figure to stand with me
Teaching me her ways, a best friend
Beauty in every blink,
Watch her, admire her
So ambitious, so gentle
Her adoring eyes look into mine as she grows me,
Nurtures me and shows me how to love,
How to live,
Respect flows out of her heart, sending to me
Creating an attachment
A bond
Mother and daughter
So inspired,
With every laugh that echoes among her breath, my eyes shine in rhythm
Her hair so soft, mine the same – but hidden with materialism
She will never grow old in my heart,
I will make her proud, as she created my soul
Thank you Mum,
I love you

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  • whittsatwoopi
    whittsatwoopiabout 5 years ago

    That is great, your mum should take a photo and you should write these words and make a card – a winner in my books!

  • Trish O'Brien
    Trish O'Brienabout 5 years ago

    Darling you are SUCH a beautiful girl, thank you so much, its just beautiful, and a lovely surprise. I love you too sweetie, with all my heart xxxxx
    Hang on, I’m coming to your room to give you a hug, lol :-)

  • Luke Stephensen
    Luke Stephensenabout 5 years ago

    Hahaha – So cute your mum is on here also.

  • micheleirene
    micheleireneabout 5 years ago

    Wow…..I just read your mum’s poem First Born that sent me to tears….she directed me here and now I officially have to go and re-do my makeup. What an incredibly beautiful gift this is for her. You can really feel the deep love that the two of you share :)

  • thankyou so much shelly.
    My mom and i are very close.
    im glad this touched you.

    – naomiinreality

  • veritasunsaid
    veritasunsaidabout 5 years ago

    awwwww; now thats sweet!!!
    (it actually reminded me to call my mother:)

  • barnsis
    barnsisabout 5 years ago

    Change the line to mother and son and you could have written this about my mom. Excellent writing.

  • benthebrown
    benthebrownabout 5 years ago

    You are a beautiful writer and express yourself so truly. You are both so lucky to have each other to share your friendship and creativity.

  • Leon A.  Walker
    Leon A. Walkeralmost 5 years ago

    Excellent work!!!

  • barnsis
    barnsisalmost 5 years ago

    Congratulations, this written work has
    been featured in the group Remember When.

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