How the Forcefield was won and lost.

MuscularTeeth
Author: MuscularTeethVoted Most Helpful Bubbler
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How the Forcefield was won and lost.

How the best laid plans can go wrong

How the Forcefield was won and lost. belongs to the following groups:

***♂♥♥QUORN♥♥♀, Sci Fi and Short stories - Spherical Scriptings

Not long ago there was a man who almost lived in his shed.

Day and night he worked in his back shed until finally, through sheer determination, skill, luck and perseverance he managed to create a forcefield.

It was a small device, that fit snugly around his wrist and once turned on would emit a small field around his body that would be impervious to anything .

So confident was he that instead of duplicating the device, or putting the plan to paper, he decided to test it.

Luckily for him he was close to a nuclear testing island, and so quietly he made his way to the island waiting for all the soldiers and inhabitants to leave. Once alone he setup camp and waited for the countdown…

Minutes before the bomb was set to go off he turned his forcefield on, and walked right up next to the massive bomb..

He waited and right on the dot when the bomb was set to go off it did so with a supersonic bang…

and shot the poor inventor out of the earths atmosphere, and into space.
Where he shortly died due to a lack of air.

The device and any knowledge of its creation has been lost to the outer reaches of space.

  • butchart

    butchart

    ha…... nice allegory my friend…. good stuff….........b

  • MuscularTeethVoted Most Helpful Bubbler replied

    hey dude. thanks mate.

  • rudeboyskunk

    rudeboyskunk

    so what happened to the bomb?

  • MuscularTeethVoted Most Helpful Bubbler replied

    it went bang. sent man flying thru air – into space. damn, this means i no good writer.

  • Maximus

    Maximus

    Hey MT the best way to become a great writer is to simply keep writing. :)

  • Russell Fry

    Russell Fry

    great story! lol

  • rudeboyskunk

    rudeboyskunk

    no no you are a very good writer… its my reading that’s not so good

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  • ozjami

    ozjami

    LOL ..well it kinda worked lol !!!

  • Linda Ridpath

    Linda Ridpath

    you know that is almost kinda sad!!!! but very well written!!!:>)

  • Van Cordle

    Van Cordle

    Great story!!

  • kangarookid

    kangarookid

    awesome! poor guy though… should’ve maybe tested it a bit differently ;)!

  • MuscularTeethVoted Most Helpful Bubbler replied

    INDEED !
    :)

  • Damian

    Damian

    Haha, that’s excellent!

  • MuscularTeethVoted Most Helpful Bubbler replied

    cheers mate.

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar

    great story Teeth! huggles ma friend

  • MuscularTeethVoted Most Helpful Bubbler replied

    a great compliment from an accomplished writer as yourself.

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar

    so nice of you, your welcome my friend! :)

  • TeriLee

    TeriLee

    HA!! That was great!!!

  • muckypup

    muckypup

    heh, that’s a great story :D

  • MuscularTeethVoted Most Helpful Bubbler replied

    cheers.

  • Matthew Dalton

    Matthew Dalton

    But what a way to go – almost worth it for the ride. Great story.

  • MuscularTeethVoted Most Helpful Bubbler replied

    lol hell yeah – being shot into orbit would be one hell of a way to go.
    thanks for reading it mate..

  • valzart

    valzart

    O woot! wot fun hun! lol! love it ;} hugglez

  • MuscularTeethVoted Most Helpful Bubbler replied

    lol. woooot !

  • Andrew Price

    Andrew Price

    Bonkers but I like it

  • MuscularTeethVoted Most Helpful Bubbler replied

    LOL. Read “ode to an indescribable object” and then say bonkers.

  • gillsart

    gillsart

    Amazing….

  • MuscularTeethVoted Most Helpful Bubbler replied

    thanks. its ok… bit rough

  • ArtGenovee

    ArtGenovee

    well that was a nice proof of the man to be perfect…lol
    and it banged him to the myspace, where he still flys around because the fact was, he needed the air not , who needs air or money as creator or artist?
    have a great sunday, nice to meet you thru the bubble t-shirt :)

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