A young Godling
A young Godling belongs to the following groups:
Media and Publicity, Safe Haven and WMGWhen i was born i had already mastered 14 different martial arts, and could dance the mamba and various national dances of the latin america’s. I had tried smoking and had quit it and quit smoking in a way that defied reason. I reinvented fire.
My back was bent with the items i carried and the thoughts that kept my newly born feet to the earth. I had in absence of alcohol taken up an addiction to the extremes in life and i would often be heard in the ramblings of tales told by the elderly and the village mad.
My ways were wanton and could be still, if and when the compunction takes hold.
By 16 i had grown and become more than i was yet less than i could be or would have will been had.
I had worked multiple jobs. Sometimes all at once. Often – never.
My knowledge was boundless within the cage of what it knew. And of the things i beheld, one could be forgiven into thinking it had all been done before, and better.
I tried more jobs and tasks and challenges. I rose to them all and when i needed to i could rise even further. Sometimes i could raise a mountain for my purpose. Or slash deep the earth for a new ravine.
By 30 my powers were crescent. I had the Wind to control and the Sea to do my bidding. I could rend the earth with a thought and with another, create a world anew.
None could stand before me, though some denied me.
Galaxies and Realities are mine.
Jacqueline Gwynne
Who am I??
MuscularTeeth
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you are Venus, otherwise known as Aphrodite.
Globalphotos
Love this, well done !!
Rheenie
wOWA this is so awesome very powerfull
jansnow
Fabulous! I love this piece:)
Cindy RN
This is wonderful, the words flowed beautifully and kept my undivided attention through the whole reading…love it!!
MuscularTeeth
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thank you harrietRN, i had a definite tone of voice in my head whilst writing this, perhaps thats why the words flowed so well.
margpie
I gave you a tone too and it was very effective, i read all the way to the end (normally i cut to the chase if it seems too long and winded) I found this facinating and it left me wanting more, fair play MT a great piece of literature here :)
MuscularTeeth
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thank you margpie – most kind of you
raae
It was too many words for me. But i read the last two lines and they blew my mind. Great work Teeth!
MuscularTeeth
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thats the way Raee. you ROCK my friend. i would have chosen any random two lines instead..
PJ Ryan
I lover your trippy experimental mind .. you’re ace xx
MuscularTeeth
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i happy happy for this mighty event.
:)
PJ Ryan
i’m feeling the love :)
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WELL…. IT SEEMS DELUSIONS OF GRANDEUR AND OTHER COMMON PSYCHOLOGICAL DISORDERS ARE STILL RIFE UPON THIS EVER WONDERFULLY POSITIVE ETERNAL GOLDEN SHOWER OF A WEBSITE.
WELL GO ON THEN!!
OOOH PLEEEEEASE ….. SEND US A TSUNAMI!!!
.... MAKE US A DEATH STAR OUT OF CHEESE… LORD VADER!!
OR PERHAPS YOU COULD SIMPLY TAKE A SLASH AND MAKE A NEW GRAND CANYON IN THE BACKYARD … RIGHT NEXT TO THE HILLS HOIST.
BETTER STILL WHILE YOU’RE AT IT …DREAMBOAT… WHY DON’T YOU GIVE ME ONE OF THOSE WICKUD EKKIES THAT YOU’VE OBVIOUSLY BEEN INHALING… I MIGHT PISS IN YOUR POCKET ASWELL.
SERIOUSLY…. MAN … YOU’VE GOT TO SHARE …
BECAUSE IF YOU’RE DIVINE ZEN MASTER MING THE MERCILESS….
THEN I WANNA BE HELEN OF TROY!!
I THINK YOU BETTER COME ON BACK DOWN NOW YURI…
BEFORE YOU BUMP YOU’RE HEAD ON SPUTNIK!!!
MuscularTeeth
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wouldnt touch E with a barge pole my friend.
and who says its meeee !
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WELL IT IS WRITTEN IN FIRST PERSON… OOH OH… RIGHT !!!
IT’S ONE OF THOSE WHO AM I QUESTIONS… RIGHT!!
I DIDN’T REALISE YOU WERE TRYING TO IMPERSONATE TONY BARBER.
LET’S SEE ..WHO ARE YOU… HMMMMMMM
HMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM….. ARE YOU…
SYD BARRETT!!!
MuscularTeeth
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WHO are yOU ya PUNK? think your so FREAKIN GREAT USING CAPS ALL TEH TIME.
:)
WELL SCUM I CHALLENGE YOU TO A DUEL.
FUCKER VS FUCKER.
MuscularTeeth
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youre quiet…
was gunna be a duel with pillows if thats any consolation.
LostGod
oooh exciting!
LostGod
you talking to me or yourself?
MuscularTeeth
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actually was meant for mr caps lock.
LostGod
well you repied to yourself buddy
nice piece.
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WHY DOES EVERY ONE ALWAYS HASSLE ME ABOUT USING CAPS LOCK?
SHOCKING!! POOR INTERNET PROTOCOL!!! CAPS LOCK !!! THE HERPES OF CHAT ROOMS AND INTERNET COMMUNITIES EVERYWHERE!!
NOOOOOO!!!!
NOT CAPS LOCK!!!
IS HE YELLING AT US!!!
WHY!!?
I DONT GET IT!!!
WHYEEEEEEEE!!!!
WANKING MAKES YOU BLIND
CAPS LOCK IS EASIER FOR OTHER PEOPLE TO READ…. ARE YOU GETTING IT NOW???
MuscularTeeth
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nah mate, its just you waste more space up with your caps, nothing about yelling.
your not deserving of a larger font.
whitecrow
Somebody tell Stringer to quiet the fuck down, please?
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SAIL AWAY ….DREAMBOAT…
THE CAPS IS HERE TO STAY.
MuscularTeeth
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aah your up again.
MissKristy
Oh, the power! Love it.
HeatherTS
boys boys…play nice, beating ppl up is sposed to be my thing remember? jeez…
great piece, it really is well written…g’nite jeezus :o)
MuscularTeeth
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lol. well if your meant to do the beating up, your awfully nice about it.
;0
HeatherTS
ah, you must have missed where i told sum1 id rip their head off and spit on their carcass if they efyouceekayed with me again….i was pretty testy today…
of course i doubt id ever have to tell u that, you arent an ahole, whats scary, is a lot of ppl on my page are but they are just cool aholes! ahaha! lmfao
MuscularTeeth
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i think we all get a kick from annoying each other!
HeatherTS
i’d have to agree…its humorous really….we are a bunch of moody bastards around here!
MuscularTeeth
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who you calling moody?
:)
HeatherTS
dont make me beat you!!!
rain-dogs
Love the title…excellent work it reminds me of A. E. van Vogt for some reason…fav lines gotta be …yet less than i could be or would have will been had…..you got a sharp pen mt…....cheers
rubyjo
good grief, i started reading and couldn’t stop, you had me on the first line.
MuscularTeeth
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you do me a great honor. more than anythign i would like to write a book.