David Murphy


"Thankyou.....for holding my hand....."

In a faraway corner of the farm, I stumbled across the small cairn of rocks, with the little brass plaque, and the memories came flooding back. The propellor had long since rotted, that had long gone, but my mind was very much alive, and as my nostalgic look traversed the land, her words came slowly to me….........
They were an eccentric couple, for war-torn England, dashing about the countryside, thrilling the crowds with their stunts and aerial magic, the ancient Tiger Moth never letting them down. With their flowing scarves and leather flying gear, the romantic lives they lead was the envy of all. But what was most obvious, to all and sundry, was the deep affection each held for the other…...always, the loving embraces, the eye contacts, were prevalent, and everyone was touched by the camaderie and the connection between the two daredevils. They owned the skies, and the hearts and minds of those who watched.
It seems so odd now, reminiscing, that they would choose to embark on the dangerous stunt that had such fatal consequences. Why, was the never-ending question. They had it all, and risked everything, all for nought. And who would have contemplated flying a wooden plane across the Channel, she strapped to the wing, to fly over Calais, with the strongest concentration of flak and Messerschmidts in France, and then to turn around and return to the adoring English crowds? Why did they think that?
Well, they did. And one cold and bleak September evening, bedecked in their leathers, they warmed up the Moth and flew into the night, joyfully waving to the awed crowd as he waggled the wings with her in place, and every single person prayed to the heavens they would return. ......Everyone…...
All went well, the crossing smooth, but, as luck would have it, a bomber flight had passed earlier over Calais, and the dreaded flak crews were still at their posts…....waiting for stragglers. And who knows what they thought when a lone, wooden Moth, a woman on one wing, flew slowly into range…...perhaps they couldn’t see, perhaps they suspected a ploy, who knows…....but they let forth with a terrible enfilade, the deadly shrapnel, super-heated and menacing, becoming a wall of hot death….....and like moths to a flame, the foolhardy lovers pressed on. Miraculously, they were not instantly obliterated, but alas, a nearby bursting shell sprayed the little flying machine, puncturing the flimsy wing fabric, and holing the timber frame…..and the Moth wheeled around and dove for the English coast, aflame. Flying skill prevented them from plunging into the cold, dark sea, as he wrestled with the shattered controls. Unbeknownst to her, he was mortally wounded, and, unbeknown to him, she had hot metal embedded in her thigh. And on they flew, mouthing words of encouragement, as their craft burnt all around them…..
........the coast!! They had made it, the White Cliffs resplendent in the moonlight as the stricken Moth approached. The farms paddock, just beyond the cliffs, was the nearest point for the crashlanding, and he skillfully brought the blazing Moth down as gently as he could, his beloved clasping the struts on the shattered wing, the aircraft aflame, himself nearing death…...the dying Moth bellied onto the ground, sliding, grinding, smoke and dust and flames everywhere…......the wooden propellor sheared off and bounded to god knows where, she was flung head first into a gorse thicket…....and all the while, he rode the Moth to her, and his, eventual resting place….....a firey inferno, for both.
I saw it all, I was the first there, I didn’t know where to run to….....the plane, to him, or to her, unmoving, in the cushioning gorse. She moaned, and i chose her, and as I neared, I could see she was terribly injured….....fatally so. She looked at me, with the fire in her eyes, tears forming, knowing…....and grasped my hand, a grip of iron. Her eyes said everything, she knew her fate…......I watched as her life flashed before her, an amazing existence, full of fun and pleasure….....the lids started to close, the grip weakened…...
.......and then, for an instant, her eyes flared open, and she gazed at me, full and true, her last effort was to pull me close, and then whisper into my trembling ear …...

............”thankyou…...for holding my hand…...”“

  • Jane Marin

    Jane Marin

    Beautifully written!

  • David Murphy replied

    Jane….... thankyou!!

  • terezadelpilar

    terezadelpilar

    beautiful David, I didn“t know you were such a fantastic Writer:) Congrats:)

  • David Murphy replied

    Tereza…..you’re far too kind…....but thankyou, all the same!

  • CraigsMom

    CraigsMom

    It made me cry…wonderful writing!!!!!

  • David Murphy replied

    Oh my!! No way, you mustn’t be serious!
    Thankyou!

  • salsbells69

    salsbells69

    Wow..what a story….superb.

  • David Murphy replied

    Salsbells….lovely words….its probably a one-off.

  • Wendi Donaldson

    Wendi Donaldson

    OH David….this is a whole new side of you…... what a poignant story. Now I’m all veklempt! Beautiful work, my friend.

  • David Murphy replied

    veklempt?? Does that mean you’re unhinged??
    haha…...I thought I already knew that lol!!
    A big thankyou, Wendi!!

  • Globalphotos

    Globalphotos

    More, I want more !!! Such a talented writer, beautiful :-))

  • David Murphy replied

    Wow Varinia….!!
    Well, another might have to be about the sea…......
    That would please, I’m sure!

  • OZZREBELXTI

    OZZREBELXTI

    I don’t read a lot but I just had to keep reading this well done David..

  • David Murphy replied

    Good perseverance, sir!!
    I don’t write a lot, but just pressed on with this, so I can sympathise!

  • Shelly Hiebert

    Shelly Hiebert

    David you made my makeup run you big jerk! Wow….I so enjoyed reading that. I always thought you had a way with words with your descriptions on your images and comments you make to others but I had no idea you had such an AMAZING way with them. Please tell me there will be more? Please!

  • David Murphy replied

    Crack me right up, you do!!
    Runny makeup!! What a classic…....
    OK, cake it on, I wanna see the result from a REAL Mills & Boon…..
    hahaha

  • MelanieSpeaks

    MelanieSpeaks

    Beautiful work…

  • David Murphy replied

    Melanie…..thankyou!!

  • Tina Longwell

    Tina Longwell

    Lovely…wonderfully written. :)

  • David Murphy replied

    Too kind, Tina, very much appreciated!

  • linaji

    linaji

    Wow print this up in WRITING CAUSE YOU GOT A WINNER!

  • David Murphy replied

    Well, I don’t know what to say…...
    THATS a compliment, and thankyou!!

  • Mary Ann Reilly

    Mary Ann Reilly

    David, this is fabulous. Reminiscent in tone and style of The English Patient. A joy to read, full of sadness and somehow, redemption.

  • David Murphy replied

    There is a deeper meaning, yes, Mary Ann….
    And redemption is cool!!
    Thankyou heaps!!

  • Anne O'Connor

    Anne O'Connor

    DAVID, FABULOUS. YOU HAVE THE KNACK WITH WORDS. This is something that should be entered into short story comp or to magazine for publishing. Tis very good and you should write more and see where it takes u. Well done.

  • David Murphy replied

    Fantastic compliment, my friend…...I know you speak from the heart, Anne, but surely you flatter me here! Its a one-off, no more, no less.

  • Ronald Jore

    Ronald Jore

    Wow, beautiful story, very touching indeed.

  • David Murphy replied

    Thankyou sir, appreciate the comment!

  • Josie Jackson

    Josie Jackson

    Far out David, this is heart wrenching, how absolutely gorgeous, didn’t know you had a hidden talent, and yes, I want more as well, have you ever written a book? if not WHY NOT????

  • David Murphy replied

    Josie, you are far too kind…..
    I’ll leave publishing to the luminaries that are all thru the RB site…..
    this is Mills and Boon stuff!

  • Vicki Ferrari

    Vicki Ferrari

    Thank you David! Beautiful words!

  • David Murphy replied

    Vicki…....you’re a gem, thanks heaps!!

  • Globalphotos

    Globalphotos

    Oh definitely though I think I would enjoy anything you wrote after this taste :-))

  • David Murphy replied

    You flatter me, Varinia, but its ok…....Don’t stop lol lol!!
    Seriously, I had fun, and it was a spur of the moment, a dream, no less…...
    And 1/2 an hour later, and 40 years since my last effort, there it was!!

  • Globalphotos

    Globalphotos

    lol well I shall expect more, now that you’ve let the cat out of the bag so to speak ;-))

  • David Murphy replied

    Ok….....I tentatively say “stay tuned”......!!

  • Globalphotos

    Globalphotos

    will do !

  • Shelly Hiebert

    Shelly Hiebert

    Oh…..Mills and Boon…..you lost me there! Must be an Australian thing ;)

  • David Murphy replied

    They are the publishers of really soppy love stories and books…....’50’s style love affairs, very straight-laced, no frills…...........definetly no F words, or similar etc etc…..
    Obviously, it must be an Aussie thing, the opposite of what I thought…......!!

  • colaful

    colaful

    this was wiked to read dad an u know me im definately not much of a reader but you BETTER be writing more because i thoroughly enjoyed that. kept getting distracted reading it at work lol but got there eventually… i totally agree with everyone else…..WE WNT MORE!!

  • David Murphy replied

    hi there Katie girl!
    r u good?
    i will have to write more now, won’t i?
    especially since my lil girl wants me too!!!!!
    love you!!

  • artist4peace

    artist4peace

    very very nice, rich!

  • David Murphy replied

    Toooooo kind!!

  • Garth Smith

    Garth Smith

    Not sure i can go taking pics with you any more David.
    You’ve gone all metro, “in touch with your inner self” on me.
    I want the beer swilling, cigarette smoking, campfire baked bean eating farting contest, gung-ho, intrepid adventurer back.
    And if we do go taking pics again – I aint holding your hand!!
    Lets hope this was an abberation. LOL
    Ah well, at least the girls liked it…... now then.. ........where was that pencil I had ….?

  • David Murphy replied

    hahahahaaha…......go watch Shawshank…......THATS the real me!!!

  • Phineous   Cassidy

    Phineous Cas...

    incredible stuff well done on that

  • David Murphy replied

    Thanks mate!!
    Sorry for the late reply!

  • Patty Boyte

    Patty Boyte

    Wow, am I impressed!! You keep replying “one off”, the only “one off” would be the books flying off the shelf one right after the other! Beautifully written. ; )

  • David Murphy replied

    Awww,
    now my head is swellin again, Patty!!
    I most likely will very rarely do something like this again…...
    Its just a moment thing, you know….....wake up in a dream and think “I’m going to write that down…....”, and go and do it…...
    Maybe i should dream more!!

  • Patty Boyte

    Patty Boyte

    I do know exactly what you mean David…thank you for sharing your dream with all of us. You bet, don’t stop dreaming…

  • David Murphy replied

    My pleasure…......and thankyou!

  • David Lewins LRPS

    David Lewins LRPS

    This is excellent David! After reading the first two paragraphs I went and made a cupa, came back and started it again. First class…I don’t know much about writing but you certainly held my interest with this.

  • David Murphy replied

    I’m stoked that you enjoyed this one-off effort, David!!
    There might be a follow up, but…....who knows! I like taking pics too much to concentrate on writing too much…...wait and see, I guess!
    Thanks mate!

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