Pain your surname
oh…for all of us at one time or another…
Pain your surname belongs to the following groups:
! Creative Writing & Poetry !, "Poetry and Beautiful Women" , All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Core [C.O.R.E], Graphic Scratch, Melbourne & Victoria, Midnight Ramblers, Pleasure & Pain, The Sensual Word and WMGIm feeling your hurt thru your words
your beautiful mind onset with pain
im realising that love has stopped for you
as you suggest your warm bright inner sun
has now been replaced by cold dark freezing rain
in my mind im aghast you sound resigned to it
that you now seek just to survive
going through those life’s little motions
as if you are merely dotting lifes little i’s
you drop those little hints to me
that suggest your life’s now spent in a game
as you tell me theres no more love in you
i think im sure i feel you say
that somehow your maiden surname’s
the thing of which you blame
as a friend i deeply listen to you
i say to you in comfort that beauty you will forever be
the world this world our beautiful world
is your yummy oyster
and its laying fresh for your taking
down at your gorgeous feet
with your usual grace and beauty
move forward & propel your light
so we who love you still can touch you
help you recover when you fight
those lonely internal fights
feel our arms around you
so many of our souls offer you love
us, the light for you to bathe in
enjoy
discover
on your darkest of dark lonely nights
play with us
romance us
come still dance with us
revel in us in your accustomed lust
use us & feed your waning power
retain control over your dark rain & sunny bright light
feel your joy in the love around you
fuel your warmth blessedly share
let your star shine us its true light
may we again swoon in your stare
share all of you that you give us to love you
walk tall head on high
its you thats important here just you
shout your joy with us out to darkest blue depths of the sky
not tary please in thought of your surname
when looked at in importance here
a name remains only a name.
oneperfectkiss
this is beautifully written MS and with wonderful sentiments. I do believe that people resonate to their names somehow. much love to you. xxxx
Mudsoldat replied
i think we do too OPK..sometimes we forget us dont we…thanks for reading it my friend. xx MS
Earhart Chappe...
i know the name thing oh too well, and i felt the words..thank you—chappel
Mudsoldat replied
and you my friend… enjoy new horizons. MS