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Wow….you have set sail with a real mission in your heart….I commend you for being absolute in your plan… Reclaiming our real life back….Is that the one where we really are equal under the same setting sun? The same life that we all breathe the same air and have similar basic needs? Your stanza with reference to different idealogy..Oh to take remove the idea that we need to relate on an idea…instead of accepting we can just relate…. You have spoken like a true lover of life here me thinks XX
Sweet woman, thank you! I felt a bit conflicted writing this. Bit over the place, but basically what you’ve seen is exactly where my head was leading me. I do love life and really think we can let ourselves have our minds or hearts derailed from the best plan – the real life we all know we can have and in fact deserveI love your expression for relating to one another too remove the idea that we need to relate on an idea…instead of accepting we can just relateSo we’re a mutual appreciation society it seems KS!!!Thank you xoxo
Wow! Wonderfully crafted and clearly stated piece of writing! This oozes with intelligence. No wonder you’re having a hard time finding a mate. They’ll have to be pretty smart to spark you my dear! Kudos! And good luck!
Thanks AmbientOh I don’t have too much trouble – better to be single than settle down is my fervent belief!!!I’m pretty much convinced the divorce rate is only so high because many people want a special day, not a life togetherBut thanks for the good wishes – appreciate them!!!And yes, intelligence is a must, so I really adore your kind comment of this oozing that LOL
“I am sick of waking up tired; knowing I’ve wasted time”love that line especially great job
Thanks Shoaib, as always your encouragement means the world to me xoxoActually, just occurred to me – have I misappropriated that line from one of your poems?Know that you and I often dwell on the same preoccupations.Know I’ve been mighty impressed by your musings on time and physics and suchLet me know if I’ve subconsciously mirrored you and I’ll put the link into my description
Power doesn’t exist from one person alone.It comes from friends and laughter through the nation
Love ‘N’ Laughter Kriss
Thanks Kriss! We are on the same page my friend. L&L xoxoPS: Did you notice you’re referenced in the description?
did you notice that when you follow the link to me you can see my willy ?
You should know I’m observant :DL&L xoxox
so you ARE looking at my willy !
Bad man, whatever will people think of me now!!!
they will think
OOooh look at that Debs with her penis envy !
Anyone who accuses me of penis envy is likely to enjoy some of my more harshly worded thoughts!!! Not that I’m trying to prompt such a thing, so on second thoughts…Do not want to seem like she who protesteth too much methinks!!!LOL xoxo
so now what you Don’t envy my penis ??
sheesh just like a woman allove rthe place no rhyme nor reason
I give up my poor head is spinnning, I need to lie down in a dark room with a Vodka now
Get thee to thy vodka – I am returning to sociability of a non-RB kind xoxo
You turn venting into a beautiful artform.
Thanks so much Jono. I don’t like to vent all over people, so writing is my solace for moods. Seems to me a more mature way of handling life’s problems xoxo
That’s really cool. I sooo agree with this!
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