Deep in a place with forgotten hope
where lovers lie and children weep
where the iron folds of deception so often lurk and creep
One soul, pure of heart
made a journey, without fear or regret
Her decent was swift
her objective clear
But in a world of easy tears,
her bread crumb trail soon fell silent
painted over by the stormy colors of an aging sky
Her inner compass spins
and the once steady confidence begins to falter and run dry
Still, she trudges on
One image pushes her through time
The memory of a man
who once was stable, his head held high
Now lost beneath this same aging sky
Each time he walks for light
his circle ends, exactly where it began
Near to becoming another statue, in this land of forgotten lives
For this man, she pushes on
through tangled webs
and a forrest that collects hello’s
never issuing a goodbye
Those who enter,
most often, lose track of time
Tattered and torn
Her heart beats fast,
but both legs move slow
every step, pulled to the ground
by a force hiding far below
Clear
Their eyes meet,
with an equal recognition
Each face, tells the other what they already know
but the man can’t move
his legs now permanent
in this place they call defeat
One last hope,
he calls out, though the voice is both weary and weak
Run! before you become a prisoner in this land without a sun
Turn… and run…..
She watches as the man’s eyes close
forever a statue in a land built by friend and foe
She turns her head in shame
If only she hadn’t waited so long…
to take this journey and ease a mans pain…
-people often need a helping hand but are too afraid or too prideful to ask. When you see someone in need, don;t wait. take a journey before it’s too late.
– Rest in peace Ally.
DiannaLee, 6 months ago
Gosh…this is so deep! I love it, its so intense!!! I felt the whole journey…
KEITH R. WILL..., 6 months ago
that is incredible it’s like u feel the man dying yet trying to warn others of this fate
Matt Richardson in reply to KEITH R. WILLIAMS’s comment, 6 months ago
Thank you! I’m really happy that you enjoyed it. =)
ktspinstu, 6 months ago
that’s great! you can really get into it all you read it. amazing work
Matt Richardson in reply to ktspinstu’s comment, 6 months ago
thanks!
Rella, 6 months ago
Wow, this is amazing writing….so many levels with the story so delicately placed on top. Love it!
Matt Richardson, 6 months ago
thanks Rella!
loramae, 6 months ago
I find I don’t really have the words….
courtneyklein, 6 months ago
i like this one a lot matt!