I Would Write a Symphony

Machismo is a tuneless serenade
one note done over and over
sung to other guys.
I would write a symphony
every note, played in proper place.
The enchanting overture,
the dramatic movement,
the thrilling crescendo,
a standing ovation from us both.
Bravo.
The concert hall is empty.
The maestro still hears his dream.

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Ladies— “If there wasn’t a demand, there wouldn’t be a supply!”

Marc Grossberg was born on Nov. 15, 1952, in Brooklyn, New York. Lacking money, good looks, and a callous disregard for other people, he lived a miserable life and then died.

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  • Lenny La Rue, IPA
    Lenny La Rue, IPAover 4 years ago

    I need to read all your beautiful work with brandy, in a room lightly touched with Beethoven solo piano music. A master with a master. :-)

  • mordechai
    mordechaiover 4 years ago

    Muchas Gracias.

  • msdebbie
    msdebbieover 4 years ago

    Hey Mordechai! Some ladies can find their own crescendo, whether someone tries a serenade or not! I really liked the mounting tension of these lines
    The enchanting overture,
    the dramatic movement,
    the thrilling crescendo,
    a standing ovation from us both.

    Lovely xoxo

  • mordechai
    mordechaiover 4 years ago

    Thank you. My intention with the piece was an invitation to play together..

  • annieannie
    annieannieabout 4 years ago

    if there was no demand there would be no supply…. ? ….. women demand?…. men supply ?…. [infered….] but…. mordechai writes …. we enjoy….and demand more…please

  • mordechai
    mordechaiabout 4 years ago

    Comedian I saw on tv said he asked he female friends how to appeal to women. He said they told him, “Whatever you do, don’t be one of those big macho jerks”. He said, look around and who’s getting all the action?! Guys, let’s say it together.. And I joined him in saying, The big macho Jerks!" His last line— “Girls, if there wasn’t a demand, there wouldn’t be a supply!!”

  • gary roberts
    gary robertsover 3 years ago


    congratulations on your well-deserved feature!

  • supernan
    supernanover 2 years ago

    I totaly agree with Annie x

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