Run! Hide! Retreat!

Donald Cameron

Run! Hide! Retreat!

Once upon a tide
at the milkiest point of the planet
lay the underwater city of Seafield
under statues of dullest gray granite
though the timing could never be certain
it all points to a good while ago
some say it’s myth and some say it’s truth
but time’s passed and we’ll never quite know

There’s talk of a fisherman named Old Penny Brown
a man of contradictions and many few words
who kept himself to himself
and fed his fish to the birds
he sailed the high seas for days and days and days
searching for a place he knew couldn’t be found
and when he never returned
folk assumed he had drowned

But what really occurred
before you start feeling pity
was his little boat crashed
into this great long lost city
oh heck! oh hell!
as he mopped up his brow
where on earth am I?
and what will I do now?

He stepped out of his craft
trying to deal with the strain
and watched disbelieving
as water started to drain
quickly scrambling for safety
he started to pray
scratching his skull
whilst the sea fled away

There were palaces and castles
sunken ships and treasure
fairgrounds, casinos
unimaginable pleasures
I’m sure i’ve not seen such a place in my life!
he marvelled and wondered how there could come to be
such a magical wonder
hidden under the sea

Every ounce of his good sense
implored him to leave
it’s risky! it’s danger!
run! hide! retreat!
but the sea soon returned
and left him no choice
he became their new leader
it became his new voice

Of course it all took its toll
and the city soon crumbled
Old Penny passed on
and the buildings all tumbled
yet if you look closely
and keep your eyes peeled
you might glimpse what remains
of the long lost Seafield

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Location: Seafield, Kirkaldy, Fife, Scotland

© Donald Cameron 2009
Monophotography.co.uk

Run! Hide! Retreat! belongs to the following groups:

Dilapidated Buildings, Heritage in Stone, Rocks and Stones, The Scots are Coming and Timelapse/Long Exposure Photography
Run! Hide! Retreat! by Donald Cameron
  • Andy Mueller

    Andy Mueller

    That is a beautiful scene, Donald.

  • Donald Cameron replied

    Cheers Andy

  • Kevin Skinner

    Kevin Skinner

    This is superb. Fantastic light you’ve captured here and stunning subject as well! Great work…...as usual :-)

  • Donald Cameron replied

    Thanks Kevin, yes it’s quite an unusual sight in Scotland isn’t it.

  • JennyDean

    JennyDean

    wonderful work.

  • Donald Cameron replied

    Thanks Jenny

  • clickinhistory

    clickinhistory

    wonderful use of the light on the rocks

  • Donald Cameron replied

    Yes the lighting was fantastic that day, it’s ideal when there’s lots of thick clouds and just a few pockets of light coming through.

  • Kevin Bergen

    Kevin Bergen

    The subtle blue really does it for me with this image. Terrific!

  • Donald Cameron replied

    A sunny blue sky was threatening to break through but didn’t quite make it :)

  • Paul Manning

    Paul Manning

    so good! cheers Paul

  • Donald Cameron replied

    Thanks a lot Paul

  • joak

    joak

    usual top quality stuff love it

  • Donald Cameron replied

    Cheers Joak

  • Mike Oxley

    Mike Oxley

    Beautiful capture and atmosphere. Love the narrative. Very nicely done, Donald.

  • Donald Cameron replied

    Thanks Mike. I think the narrative is from what they call an over-active imagination :)

  • Carlos  Acín

    Carlos Acín

    This is a rare work in your portfolio, a beautiful and rare color work. Congratulations Donald, a fave for me.

    Regards.

  • Donald Cameron replied

    Indeed I don’t do colour shots very often, usually I do b&w to take the scene away from reality but this one seemed quite surreal by itself so chose to leave this one be :)

  • Richard  George

    Richard George

    Superb work. The light is fantastic. Well done.

  • Donald Cameron replied

    Thanks for your feedback Richard.

  • Scott  d'Almeida

    Scott d'Almeida

    fabulous mate

  • Donald Cameron replied

    Thanks as always Scott

  • John  Kowalski

    John Kowalski

    Ahhhh! thats so nice Donald! love the tones and the composition! fabulous image!!

  • Donald Cameron replied

    I wish I could come across conditions like this more often, you’re right there’s something about the tones in this that just works. It was like that naturally though, I can’t take much credit :)

  • Christine  Wilson

    Christine Wilson

    wow very nice indeed

  • Donald Cameron replied

    Thanks a lot Christine

  • Jamie Lamb

    Jamie Lamb

    What a beautiful shot.

  • Donald Cameron replied

    Cheers Jamie, appreciated.

  • Heather  Rivet  IPA

    Heather Rivet...

    gorgeous

  • Donald Cameron replied

    Many thanks Heather

  • A.M. Ruttle

    A.M. Ruttle

    OMGosh, I’m shell shocked by both the beautiful image and the verse; will have to digest and then add a proper comment. Let’s start with: superb.

  • Donald Cameron replied

    Hehe, any comment is good doesn’t have to be a “proper” one :) Thanks a lot.

  • GlennC

    GlennC

    Donald, I think this is one of your very best images! the sky is superb. The placement of the rocks visa vie the movement of the sky adds a touch of tension. As already mentioned the light on the rocks really makes this the image it is…

  • Donald Cameron replied

    Thanks Glenn, I quite like shooting the more unusual locations so this is one of my faves as well.

  • James Coard

    James Coard

    This is a really stunning image Donald – the decision to keep it colour was the right one in my opinion!

  • Donald Cameron replied

    Thanks James, good to hear that. I do like colour images but usually prefer the results of my ones in b&w, this was bit of a rarity!

  • A.M. Ruttle

    A.M. Ruttle

    I’m partly over the shell shock so I’ll also add: beautiful clarity of vision and image! Thanks for the interview you posted!!

  • Donald Cameron replied

    Thanks a lot. Glad you liked the interview as well.

  • simonesphotos

    simonesphotos

    Gorgeous image Donald, very unique looking structures :)

  • Donald Cameron replied

    They are indeed, a very strange place altogether.

  • Tatiana R

    Tatiana R

    Wow, Cameron, love your work! thank you for adding me to your watchlist, glad that I found your long exposures, serene and beatiful work! :-))

  • Donald Cameron replied

    You’re welcome Tatiana, thanks in return. Cameron is my surname though :)

  • Paul Thompson Photography

    Paul Thompson ...

    Stunning work!!!

  • Donald Cameron replied

    Thank you Paul, appreciated.

  • richman

    richman

    stupendous photography
    REALLY Beautiful

  • Donald Cameron replied

    Cheers Richie

  • igotmeacanon

    igotmeacanon

    fantastic image mate, this is right up my street

  • Donald Cameron replied

    Cheers for the feedback

  • Thordis

    Thordis

    Great, great shot!

  • Donald Cameron replied

    Many thanks

  • Tatiana R

    Tatiana R

    Yes Donald, my appologies please :-)) Love the mood in your works!

  • Donald Cameron replied

    No worries, thanks :)

  • Linda  Morrison

    Linda Morrison

    Wonderful shot

  • Donald Cameron replied

    Thanks Linda

  • redtree

    redtree

    Surreal. Extraordinary. Amazing.

  • Donald Cameron replied

    It is a pretty bizarre sight that’s for sure, guess that’s why I was drawn to it :)

  • Mel Brackstone

    Mel Brackstone

    What a magical scene! Beautiful light!

  • Donald Cameron replied

    Thanks Mel, it is a fantastically unusual sight and yet rarely photographed as far as I can tell.

  • Joel Tjintjelaar

    Joel Tjintjelaar

    The colours work really well here! Always good to see some colours in a predominantly B&W stream. Excellent.

  • Donald Cameron replied

    You’re right I guess the colour ones do stand out a bit more amongst mainly b&w shots.

  • Melinda Gaal

    Melinda Gaal

    This is amazing! So beautiful.

  • Donald Cameron replied

    Thanks for all your comments Melinda

  • Laurie Search

    Laurie Search

    Love this!!

  • Donald Cameron replied

    Thanks Laurie

  • Martin Dingli

    Martin Dingli

    superb,beautiful,Excellent,Extraordinary work.

  • Donald Cameron replied

    Thanks a lot for your comments Martin, very kind.

  • Justtrying

    Justtrying

    fantastic portfolio
    very poetic

  • Donald Cameron replied

    Great thanks very much

  • cosimopiro

    cosimopiro

    the bones of the ghosts of yesteryear. the land of deities. a memory, a dream. It conjures up something that can’t totally be grasped. Beautiful capture of a mirage mate. Great story too.

  • Donald Cameron replied

    Bit of a writer yourself, I like! Thanks for your comments.

  • vaquera

    vaquera

    Outstanding!

  • Donald Cameron replied

    Thank you :)

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