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i'm gonna do it right this time

a love as pure as the one we share
needs to be put out there
shown to the world bold and proud
not softly at all but shouted loud
i want nothing more than to make known
the adoration and love she’s shown
and all i feel toward my mate
and the thanks i give to blessed fate
for taking us out of desolate lands
and putting us in each others hands
i asked her once and she said yes
but an i/m i think isn’t the best
way to have her give me her heart
so i think over i’ll start
an old ring i’ve got i’ll place on her hand
when she gets home as i make a grand
show of getting on bended knee
and asking her proper
“will you marry me?”

i'm gonna do it right this time

mohawk man

Denham Springs, United States

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Artist's Description

it’s true; i asked her (over a year ago) to marry me over yahoo i/m, and she said yes. but i feel she deserves proper treatment of such an important issue; and to not wait any longer than necessary to complete the deal

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