i'm gonna do it right this time

a love as pure as the one we share
needs to be put out there
shown to the world bold and proud
not softly at all but shouted loud
i want nothing more than to make known
the adoration and love she’s shown
and all i feel toward my mate
and the thanks i give to blessed fate
for taking us out of desolate lands
and putting us in each others hands
i asked her once and she said yes
but an i/m i think isn’t the best
way to have her give me her heart
so i think over i’ll start
an old ring i’ve got i’ll place on her hand
when she gets home as i make a grand
show of getting on bended knee
and asking her proper
“will you marry me?”

i'm gonna do it right this time by 


it’s true; i asked her (over a year ago) to marry me over yahoo i/m, and she said yes. but i feel she deserves proper treatment of such an important issue; and to not wait any longer than necessary to complete the deal

i’m just another maniac trying to get along as best i can in a cold and crazy world.

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Comments

  • Corri Gryting Gutzman
    Corri Gryting ...almost 4 years ago

    Aw….this is so sweet.

  • lisameryl
    lisamerylalmost 4 years ago

    MM, aaawww…this is so heartfelt….may it be a most beautiful proposal, marriage and lifetime of bliss! Good for you! Congrads!

  • raymondoantonio
    raymondoantonioalmost 4 years ago

    YOU ROMANTIC MM!! BRAVO! A BEAUTIFUL WRITE!!

  • Corri Gryting Gutzman
    Corri Gryting ...almost 4 years ago

    Congratulations!
    June 24, 2011

  • bearwings
    bearwingsalmost 4 years ago

    …..and you won’t have to buy a second suit for the best man, you ARE the best man.

  • MaryMac
    MaryMacalmost 4 years ago

    what a beautiful MM you are!
    best of life for you and your bride
    what a wonderful feeling you’ve
    given me to read your expression
    peace love happiness and joy to you
    and your new wife to be

  • JaneClaire
    JaneClairealmost 4 years ago

    Sweet. Do it. I have no doubt she will be thrilled. x

  • Evita
    Evitaalmost 4 years ago

    Excellent work !!! Congratulations 2nd Runner-up!
    Editors Choice Ending Sunday 26th June 2011
    The World As We See It , or as we missed it. Group

  • Jan Siemucha
    Jan Siemuchaalmost 4 years ago

    Congrats on your Editors Choice feature !

  • marella
    marellaalmost 4 years ago

    Love it !!!! Congrats on well deserved feature MM!

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