Painting with Words
If I painted what I feel
would you close your eyes to see
a bridge is being built
with the colors of splashing sea
with the colors of the night
and hues of purple mist are dancing
I can see your yellow stars
with halos made of blue
I look into your music
pastel colors spark with dew
water color raindrops
painting in the moonlight
As I paint, I touch your face
into your stars I fall
their colors start to softly blend
and I hear your ocean call
I can almost taste
the colors of your words
And if I painted what I see
would you close your eyes to feel
the raindrop on your lips
a moment we may steal
to see your stars in shades of green
our stars would almost touch
and in that stolen moment
we would taste the raindrop
RMonroe
Nice flow….Beautiful:)
Carlos Solorza
thank you Robin. a bit rusty but, just had to write this to my beautiful friend
jaycee
No one has ever written a poem for me, i am touched completely.. this is beautiful dear friend xxoo
Carlos Solorza replied
thank you JayCee, i’m glad you like it. you know that you gave me the idea for this when you told me that your eyes were blue and yellow.
jaycee
You are seriously a gorgeous person.. thank you :)
Shanina Conway
Oh I’m melting Carlos…beautiful;)
Carlos Solorza replied
hi Shanina. thank you. your comment is quite inspiring.