Forbidden Fruit

Kristy Lee
Author: Kristy Lee
Word Count: 79
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I see you with the eyes of my soul…

It’s impossible not to graze my lips across your sweet skin.
Lips parted-
Breath shallow.
Eyes heavly lashed; wide with anticipation.
Waiting-
Descending…

Temptation now realized-
hunger for one another unleashed.

Bodies dragged to the ground,
Clothes, a needless barrier
Shedded,
As if they were nothing more than wrapping paper.

Skin meets Skin.
Sighs-
Whispers-
and sweet nothings.

We sin underneath the starry sky.
Love; our own secret,

Denied.

Forbidden Fruit

  • jcmontgomery

    jcmontgomery, 3 months ago

    Oh. My.
    Excuse me for a few moments while I try to retreive my jaw from where it fell.
    Damn, I think I need a cold shower.
    Or two.

  • demon

    demon, 3 months ago

    I love my forbidden fruit…it makes it the more tasty..yumyum…and a yummmy writing minx…Huggs xoxox

  • C.C. Arshagra

    C.C. Arshagra, 3 months ago

    “Love; our own secret,

    Denied.
    This poem might finish here, and it just kills me as it does, but this cannot be the end of love. No! Not for you dear Special Lee gifted one.

  • Rella

    Rella, 3 months ago

    I literally held my breath from the first line….what an introduction!!
    So I guess I mean to say, your work is breath taking :)

  • Rhana Griffin

    Rhana Griffin, 3 months ago

    Denied

    Oh just rip my fucking heart out and show it to me, still beating, before you devour it before my dying eyes. Bloody brilliant darlin XXX

  • kseriphyn

    kseriphynNetworker Extraordinaire, 3 months ago

    Ooh the forbidden lust. Excellent poem.

  • Simon Liberta

    Simon Liberta, 3 months ago

    Kristy…................................... LOVE IT!!!!!!
    ooh, it’s getting hot in here!!!
    Very risqué

  • Naylor

    Naylor, 3 months ago

    mmmmmmm forbidden fruit tastes sooooooo good yet can turn sour so quickly…...you write with such passion and it drips from every word in this poem…. to long for another that can’t be YOURS is torture and you have captured that hunger so well !!!! (((hug)))

  • Alix Purcell

    Alix Purcell, 3 months ago

    Good lord…. I didn’t need to feel like that at 3:30 in the afternoon… but I’ll read it again, thanks :)
    Great write.

  • Wastemwizard

    Wastemwizard, 2 months ago

    Long live lust.
    A king god experience.

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