Your Masterpiece

Kristy Lee
Author: Kristy Lee
Word Count: 152
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I stand stretched out before you, my body:
your canvas, naked, framed in your tight chain,
darkened shadows caress my skin,
I see you prepare your bizarre pallete of pain.

Awaiting your inspiration, your art…

You come to me and so softly start
your brush strokes, its nine tails absorb the wet
With your light touch, colour rises in me,
faster, harder, painting a deeper red…

Each stroke, each colour draws me, closer to the line…

Your masterpiece at my body’s edge.

I imagine the colours as you touch
my limits, pushing me slightly beyond,
then soft, with a feathered caress,
your brush faintly stains me.

With my skin I respond
each time: I fade, I bend beneath your will,
as you touch me and ignite my desire.

Then firmly I stand, tightly tethered, still
I taste your power
as you paint my fire.

Your Masterpiece; I do bend to your will.

Your Masterpiece

Playful fun…you really do arouse my fire.

  • James Price

    James Price, 7 months ago

    Wow! Masterful… Inspirational…
    Portrays an incredible sense of power… and desire, in knowing exactly what you want.

  • Kristy Lee

    Kristy Lee in reply to James Price’s comment, 7 months ago

    I had to fiddle with the format..it wasn’t quite right..but will get there :)

    Thanks for the feedback Mr Price.

  • Roy barry

    Roy barry, 7 months ago

    Kristy-If it ain’t broke, don’t fix it!!

    This is sublime Art.

  • Kristy Lee

    Kristy Lee in reply to Roy barry’s comment, 7 months ago

    Thank you Roy..I’m not entirely happy with it..but I like it enough to work with it :) Thanks!

  • Roy barry

    Roy barry, 7 months ago

    I like it enough to favourite it -Thanks!!! ;)

  • LisaG

    LisaG, 7 months ago

    Ummmmm I can only think ouchie…....

    Nonetheless babe, great piece of writing…..

  • Kristy Lee

    Kristy Lee in reply to LisaG’s comment, 7 months ago

    tis a nice ouchie babe :))) muhahaha

  • Nicole Ryan

    Nicole Ryan, 7 months ago

    so gorgeous .. what a piece .. well done :)

  • Jen Whyte

    Jen Whyte, 7 months ago

    What a concept … brilliant

  • Trish Cooper

    Trish Cooper, 7 months ago

    Simply wonderful…you amaze me with your talent my friend….xoxoxoxoxoxx

  • deliriousgirl

    deliriousgirl, 7 months ago

    Exquisitely stunning in both it’s intensity and it’s delicacy!

    jen

  • hiresholmes

    hiresholmes, 7 months ago

    very steamy and beautiful… lovely

  • Nancy Fischer

    Nancy Fischer, 7 months ago

    I taste your power
    as you paint my fire.

    What an image this conjures up. You really are very talented.

  • PeteStreet

    PeteStreet, 6 months ago

    It hurts so good, the reader can feel it. Thanks for the passion in your pages!

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poem, fire, paint, lust and masterpiece