Battle Wounds

Kristy Lee
Author: Kristy Lee
Word Count: 89
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Like the quick hot
sting of bandages
ripping off a wound,
I’ll say my piece.

I’ll bite a hole
in my lip, wince,
and gasp back tears.

I’ve done the
dragging aching burn.
Hung to the torture
of hanging on…

Not this time.

This time
I am the one
to stand my ground,
arms crossed.

So the satisfaction
of the slam of the door
can leave me in MY space,
MY home,
to tend my new pink,
tender skin-
marveling at the lack
of a scar.

Battle Wounds

Just a poem about release..about pain..and about strength.

  • Jessica Tremp

    Jessica Tremp, 9 months ago

    blown away

  • LisaG

    LisaG, 9 months ago

    Kristylove,

    Much love to you babe, my arms around you always…...I wish, there was more I could offer….

    XOXOXO

  • demon

    demon, 9 months ago

    Huggggs tight….cannot say anymore…xoxox

  • gordontant

    gordontant, 9 months ago

    Wow Kristy, talk about make a statement, standing you ground being strong, I love it

  • WitheringMoon

    WitheringMoon, 9 months ago

    Very powerful, emotive work Kristy. As always brilliantly descriptive and a well told story.

  • Rhana Griffin

    Rhana Griffin, 9 months ago

    This was painful to read Kristy… it makes my heart hurt. Beautifully done darlin… XXX

  • Lumineux

    Lumineux, 9 months ago

    Man oh man! Such powerful & riveting prose, but also so wonderfully liberating

  • Jeff  Burns

    Jeff Burns, 9 months ago

    Freaking amazing great wrok

  • Madeline M.  Allen

    Madeline M. A..., 9 months ago

    You go girl, I can so relate to this one !! You rock Kristy ! So well written!!!

  • Robert Knapman

    Robert Knapman, 9 months ago

    Terrific, great little piece Kristy. Nailed it .)

  • Heather Croft

    Heather Croft, 9 months ago

    Excellent words and powerful

  • Jen Whyte

    Jen Whyte, 9 months ago

    I feel your pain …. and send you light from my spirit …..

  • Christina Martin

    Christina Martin, 9 months ago

    Yes!!!

  • flower68

    flower68, 9 months ago

    Been there.Great writing as always.

  • Kym  Breeze

    Kym Breeze, 9 months ago

    terrific writing….wow more power to you standing your ground….

  • Symmetry44

    Symmetry44, 9 months ago

    On the other side of God, my former inner-likening was at one time the crux of your seeming disdain. This was GREAT writing in that it has opened me up to whom I have since become.
    Bravo my dear, bravo!!!

  • TarrandDeV

    TarrandDeV, 9 months ago

    Yeah, I like this.

  • Outdoors2

    Outdoors2, 8 months ago

    Brilliant Resilience

  • ladyb

    ladyb, 8 months ago

    Awesome. x

  • bria2cute09

    bria2cute09, 7 months ago

    I like that and you could really feel the emotions

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poem, pain, strength, scar, fight and myself