Evolution of You

Kristy Lee
Author: Kristy Lee
Word Count: 26
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You start as a whisper,
undetectable.
Progressed to a song,
undeniable.
Rising to a scream,
uncontrollable.
Ended in a moan,
unforgettable.
Enter the fever…..
I surrender.

Evolution of You

Evolution of You belongs to the following groups:

All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical
  • Mark German

    Mark German, 10 months ago

    Man, you’re effin good, Kristy.

  • Jessica Tremp

    Jessica Tremp, 10 months ago

    damn girl

  • Jen Whyte

    Jen Whyte, 10 months ago

    That’s exactly how it is!

  • David Haviland

    David Haviland, 10 months ago

    Yep, damn straight

  • LisaG

    LisaG, 10 months ago

    I know this too well…..................................

  • gordontant

    gordontant, 10 months ago

    Kristy, another brilliant piece, what a crescendo.

  • Suzanne German

    Suzanne German, 10 months ago

    Kristy…you always say it so well…whatever it is you’re writing…your gift is amazing!

  • Trish Cooper

    Trish Cooper, 10 months ago

    wow amazing Miss K!!

  • Rhana Griffin

    Rhana Griffin, 10 months ago

    You are so incredibly talented darlin girl… This speaks to my soul in whispers that echo like a scream.

  • Christina Martin

    Christina Martin, 10 months ago

    Oh Kristy this is wonderful….

  • brummieboy

    brummieboy, 10 months ago

    Brilliant !!!!!!!!!!

  • Paul Louis Villani

    Paul Louis Vil..., 10 months ago

    The emotion to which you have surrendered, is one we all yearn and seek.
    I connected with this piece immediately and felt it’s fluttering heart and powerful hold.
    Perfect. :)

  • vinee

    vinee, 10 months ago

    This piece is hot!!

  • Anne van Alkemade

    Anne van AlkemadeWordsmith, 10 months ago

    Nice one, Divine K!

  • Del Millar

    Del Millar, 10 months ago

    Says it all !!!

  • Jeff  Burns

    Jeff Burns, 10 months ago

    Your talent amazes me. You are incredible.
    Keep them coming

  • demon

    demon, 10 months ago

    Waves the white flag…you win Kristylee…I am on my knees in surrender…hehe

  • Chris White

    Chris White, 10 months ago

    Mmm, straight to the wonderful point.

  • Beauregard

    Beauregard, 10 months ago

    So beautiful. So simple. So contextual. So alive. So vivid. So true.

  • Jennifer Vickers

    Jennifer Vickers, 10 months ago

    This is a great example of poetry. Nicely done.

  • botticcelli

    botticcelli, 10 months ago

    this is a powerful poem…

  • Pilgrim

    Pilgrimworks here, 10 months ago

    I love the simplicity, clarity and beauty of this.

  • Loredana Crupi

    Loredana Crupi, 10 months ago

    Nice!

  • moniqueemajor

    moniqueemajor, 10 months ago

    Brilliant peice of writing, simple and to the point i love it…

  • maisy

    maisy, 10 months ago

    short and sweet, i love this.

  • allisonberryart

    allisonberryart, 10 months ago

    I LOVE THIS!!!

  • peter

    peterworks here, 9 months ago

    Compelling and beautifully written.

  • C.C. Arshagra

    C.C. Arshagra, 9 months ago

    As the bare and weak and brave die into their own sweating dream & wake here.

    Kristy! Wow … the naked risk of it all.

  • kseriphyn

    kseriphynNetworker Extraordinaire, 9 months ago

    yup pretty cool.

  • Allen Carr

    Allen Carr, 9 months ago

    excellant, great!!!

  • Charlisa  Whisby

    Charlisa Whisby, 9 months ago

    enlighting!

  • Michelle Dry

    Michelle Dry, 9 months ago

    So simple yet effective… Like it.

  • meikaile

    meikaile, 9 months ago

    beautiful

  • QEverything

    QEverything, 9 months ago

    Beautiful piece.

  • burk28

    burk28, 9 months ago

    The brevity of this piece by no means takes away from the brilliance with whitch it was penned, excellent piece of writing

  • shall

    shall, 9 months ago

    Fabulous work.. packed full of meaning and power, each word carrying proudly its own weight.. love itX

  • Tallulah

    Tallulah, 9 months ago

    Powerfully moving words. Love this.

  • shaytay

    shaytay, 9 months ago

    You amaze …every time!:)

  • hiresholmes

    hiresholmes, 9 months ago

    your my kind of writer…...steamy, sexy, meaningful, and enjoyable to read

  • claudiabubble

    claudiabubble, 3 months ago

    This is my favourite amongst your poetry because of its sheer intensity and truth. Then again, all of your work is magnificent and it gets under my skin and makes me shiver.

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poem, love, lust, surrender and desire