You start as a whisper,
undetectable.
Progressed to a song,
undeniable.
Rising to a scream,
uncontrollable.
Ended in a moan,
unforgettable.
Enter the fever…..
I surrender.
You start as a whisper,
undetectable.
Progressed to a song,
undeniable.
Rising to a scream,
uncontrollable.
Ended in a moan,
unforgettable.
Enter the fever…..
I surrender.
Mark German, 10 months ago
Man, you’re effin good, Kristy.
Jessica Tremp, 10 months ago
damn girl
Jen Whyte, 10 months ago
That’s exactly how it is!
David Haviland, 10 months ago
Yep, damn straight
LisaG, 10 months ago
I know this too well…..................................
gordontant, 10 months ago
Kristy, another brilliant piece, what a crescendo.
Suzanne German, 10 months ago
Kristy…you always say it so well…whatever it is you’re writing…your gift is amazing!
Trish Cooper, 10 months ago
wow amazing Miss K!!
Rhana Griffin, 10 months ago
You are so incredibly talented darlin girl… This speaks to my soul in whispers that echo like a scream.
Christina Martin, 10 months ago
Oh Kristy this is wonderful….
brummieboy, 10 months ago
Brilliant !!!!!!!!!!
Paul Louis Vil..., 10 months ago
The emotion to which you have surrendered, is one we all yearn and seek.
I connected with this piece immediately and felt it’s fluttering heart and powerful hold.
Perfect. :)
vinee, 10 months ago
This piece is hot!!
Anne van Alkemade
,
10 months ago
Nice one, Divine K!
Del Millar, 10 months ago
Says it all !!!
Jeff Burns, 10 months ago
Your talent amazes me. You are incredible.
Keep them coming
demon, 10 months ago
Waves the white flag…you win Kristylee…I am on my knees in surrender…hehe
Chris White, 10 months ago
Mmm, straight to the wonderful point.
Beauregard, 10 months ago
So beautiful. So simple. So contextual. So alive. So vivid. So true.
Jennifer Vickers, 10 months ago
This is a great example of poetry. Nicely done.
botticcelli, 10 months ago
this is a powerful poem…
Pilgrim
,
10 months ago
I love the simplicity, clarity and beauty of this.
Loredana Crupi, 10 months ago
Nice!
moniqueemajor, 10 months ago
Brilliant peice of writing, simple and to the point i love it…
maisy, 10 months ago
short and sweet, i love this.
allisonberryart, 10 months ago
I LOVE THIS!!!
peter
,
9 months ago
Compelling and beautifully written.
C.C. Arshagra, 9 months ago
As the bare and weak and brave die into their own sweating dream & wake here.
Kristy! Wow … the naked risk of it all.
kseriphyn
,
9 months ago
yup pretty cool.
Allen Carr, 9 months ago
excellant, great!!!
Charlisa Whisby, 9 months ago
enlighting!
Michelle Dry, 9 months ago
So simple yet effective… Like it.
meikaile, 9 months ago
beautiful
QEverything, 9 months ago
Beautiful piece.
burk28, 9 months ago
The brevity of this piece by no means takes away from the brilliance with whitch it was penned, excellent piece of writing
shall, 9 months ago
Fabulous work.. packed full of meaning and power, each word carrying proudly its own weight.. love itX
Tallulah, 9 months ago
Powerfully moving words. Love this.
shaytay, 9 months ago
You amaze …every time!:)
hiresholmes, 9 months ago
your my kind of writer…...steamy, sexy, meaningful, and enjoyable to read
claudiabubble, 3 months ago
This is my favourite amongst your poetry because of its sheer intensity and truth. Then again, all of your work is magnificent and it gets under my skin and makes me shiver.