Take Me

Kristy Lee
Author: Kristy Lee
Word Count: 79
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I kneel for you,
soul baring…

Lost in this sweet slow burn,
willing myself to be calm…

I watch your face,
low husky whispers command me.
You smell my hunger
as I thirst for your touch…

Your lips on my skin,
my sweat on your soul.
Releasing buried desires,
perfect in their glow.

Play with all of me, lover..

Arouse me beyond reason,
rip open my inhibitions,
tear my fears to ribbons,

Bind me with them…
to you…

Forever.

Take Me

  • Melissa Vowell

    Melissa Vowell, 10 months ago

    sighs oh my Kristy, it felt like it was to ME :)

  • Damian

    Damian, 10 months ago

    Perfect Kristy; I loved the desire burning in this!

  • demon

    demon, 10 months ago

    WOW Miss Kristy… WOW!!!!

  • Lans

    Lans, 10 months ago

    Sensually written from the pen of your pleasing soul… Trully Good MissKristy!

  • LisaG

    LisaG, 10 months ago

    Sensual, lusty, luscious writing…..........mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

  • gordontant

    gordontant, 10 months ago

    Beautiful Kristy,

  • Rhana Griffin

    Rhana Griffin, 10 months ago

    I am flushed and fanning myself here, my heart is racing… JESUS woman!!!

    Breathtaking…

  • WitheringMoon

    WitheringMoon, 10 months ago

    Oh Kristy – this IS fabulous – i can soo relate to this one, beautiful words as always you had me gripped!!! you are such a talent!!!!

  • Jeff  Burns

    Jeff Burns, 10 months ago

    OK
    This is just awesome! You are amazing with your writing. Have mercy!

  • Christina Martin

    Christina Martin, 10 months ago

    oh my Kristy
    very….burning…beautiful

  • Trish Cooper

    Trish Cooper, 10 months ago

    ok im speechless…..............................so well done!!!!!!! You could feel the desire…My god im going to have to take a cool shower!!

  • vinee

    vinee, 10 months ago

    Very Very hot..Beautifull writting.

  • brummieboy

    brummieboy, 10 months ago

    Beuatiful, sensual , lovely .. a gorgeous piece …

  • Jedda

    Jedda, 10 months ago

    I really like this, it is beautiful, thank you for sharing!

  • Christina Martin

    Christina Martin, 10 months ago

    Let my husband read this one :) Thanks :) Tee hee keep UP the good work

  • Cathleen Tarawhiti

    Cathleen Taraw..., 10 months ago

    Holy moley, you had me at burn.

  • Suzanne German

    Suzanne German, 10 months ago

    Oh my oh my oh my!!!

    Miss Kristy – this is sensational – in every sense of the word!!!

    adorable!

    Suzanne

  • Suzanne German

    Suzanne German, 10 months ago

    ...straight to favourites…in fact …honestly - this is probably the most appealing erotic / sensual /artistic / beautiful thing I’ve read on RB….I’m sure it’s right right right up there!!!!

    wonderful!

    S.G.

  • Joanna Clark

    Joanna Clark, 10 months ago

    Really beautiful

  • wendiwoo

    wendiwoo, 10 months ago

    i like this too

  • Paul Louis Villani

    Paul Louis Vil..., 10 months ago

    my sweat on your soul
    Whoa!
    That literally took my breath away.
    What a way you have with words MissKristy, so sensual, so powerful!

  • shall

    shall, 10 months ago

    Powerful and stirring.. love it!

  • Sharon Perrett

    Sharon Perrett, 9 months ago

    wow Kristy….... the page is steaming …this is so sensual and hot, beautiful

  • GeorgieKeddy

    GeorgieKeddy, 8 months ago

    absolutly amasing . . :)

  • Quasarman

    Quasarman, 8 months ago

    Yes please and yes indeed

  • shall

    shall, 7 months ago

    oh god yes.. those torn ribbons, binding you.. an image I will carry for some time.. thank you… great writing.. and absolute pleasure Shall x

  • Jen Whyte

    Jen Whyte, 7 months ago

    Sensational

  • darrell1973day

    darrell1973day, 6 months ago

    sensual indulging tumultuous revealing vulnerable willing. I really like this. beautiful and phantastic!!

  • Davina

    Davina, 5 months ago

    Im enamored with this. Fabulous.

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life, soul, poem, love, heart, skin and lust