For every heart that finds a heart
there is a heart that cries
For every dream that is reborn
there is a dream that dies
For every smile upon a face
there is a tear to cry
For every sweet hello you say
there is a sad good-bye
For every new life in this world
there is a grave to see
For every heart that opens wide
there is one without a key…
Deri Dority, 8 months ago
I really like this!!! It rings so true.
Jeff Burns, 8 months ago
Brilliant Miss Kristy. This is very beautifully written!
LOVE IT
Jessica Tremp, 8 months ago
how true and sad
Mark German, 8 months ago
For every heart that finds a heart
There is magical joy shared and wondrous
For every dream that is reborn
There are further dreams yet untapped
For every smile upon a face
There are new possibilities opened up
For every sweet hello you say
There is anticipation for the coming day
For every new life in this world
There is a passing history of a life well-spent
For every heart that opens wide
I too open my heart…
Michael Alesich, 8 months ago
Beautifully written, I like the balance.
Thankyou for sharing.
demon, 8 months ago
Awww Miss Kristy….Hugggs, this gave me shivers and bought a tear to my eye.
Beautifully written
Kristy Lee, 8 months ago
Thank you all for the feedback.
Mark..I hear you :)
VBPurcell, 8 months ago
Another brilliant poem K.
Christina Martin, 8 months ago
I cry! great stuff
Christina Martin, 8 months ago
I cry! great stuff
Christina Martin, 8 months ago
nMark great tooLans, 8 months ago
‘softly touching… and sweetly shared! i love it!
Christina Martin, 8 months ago
For every love that is not taken
There is one left behind
For every man who loves a woman
Trust in that you will find
Jo O'Brien
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8 months ago
I couldn’t help but sing this poem aloud. It lends itself to music really beautifully.
I love the honesty and observation in this
LisaG, 8 months ago
Kristylove,
Love Love me do….
You know I love you
XOXOXOXOXOX
whoalse, 8 months ago
Ying and Yang..
what a balance….
Beautifully written….......
Trish Cooper, 8 months ago
Kristy…..damn such emotion….so heartfelt…so well written…...Trish
Kev Benge, 8 months ago
Kick arse MissKristy! All things great and small are governed by yin and yang. A big hug to the person that is this instant crying, cause I for sure am smiling!
Brett Foster, 8 months ago
MissK, I love the tempo and meter in this and like Mark I can’t help but respond in kind. Maybe you can make this an ongoing collaborative piece.
For every heart that finds a heart
there is a soul that’s trying
For every dream that is reborn
there is a triumph sighing
For every smile upon a face
a little cloud is lifted
For every sweet hello you say
there is a friend that’s gifted
For every new life in this world
there is a new joy to share
For every heart that opens wide
the world will learn to care…
vinee, 8 months ago
Love it. Its so true. Makes feel sad and happy at the same time.
brummieboy, 8 months ago
Fantastic.. so beautiful ….
thelightseeker, 8 months ago
Yes, this is life. A big truth expressed through a beautiful poem.
Thanks.
Suzanne German, 8 months ago
MissKristy – this rocks! I like the use of polar opposites and the ‘butterfly effect’ / theory…whereby each contains its opposite.
i.e. No dark without light – no happiness with sorrow – like the symbolism in the Yin/Yang or Anima/Animus (Jung).
Stylish work as usual!
Suzanne x
Rhana Griffin, 8 months ago
Kristy… this is just so incredibly beautiful and so well written!!! The cadence to it, the feelings that it invokes…. just breathtaking.
Paul Louis Vil..., 8 months ago
You words ring out like bells on a hill top!
Whether for sadness or for happiness, your work inspires :D
Melinda Kerr, 8 months ago
Ooo wee Ms Kristy, this really is excellent. It’s hard to write with such consistent rythm well done.
Loredana Crupi, 8 months ago
Succintly said MissKristy! :-)
Robert Knapman, 8 months ago
I really love it too ;)))
gordontant, 8 months ago
Kristy, never a truer word said
loramae, 8 months ago
Truth…touching!
Lou Green, 8 months ago
nice rhythm…as well as very touching
Robert Elliott, 8 months ago
beautiful, love it !!!!
Paul Martinek, 8 months ago
WOW!! So… brilliant and ….. perfect. Nice rhyme to it and the meaning is so deep and truthful. Love it nicely done!
By: Cheri Perry, 8 months ago
What wonderful words and written and portrayed so well. Beautiful work!
ellyb, 8 months ago
this has such a true yet sad emotion to it.
the combination of the two creates a beautiful poem!
Jenny Haskey, 8 months ago
Oh hun this is beautiful. Seriously tugged on my heart and choked me sad yet happy – wow made a real impact on me & looking at all these comments a true impact on many others as well as truly inspiring…
S Tang, 8 months ago
This is a magnificent piece kristy. I’m usually not a big fan of poetry but this one caught my eye and I’m glad I took the time to read it. Keep up the great work!
griffinwm, 8 months ago
lots of meaning..great work!
Anne Stanley, 8 months ago
I just love this.
Suzie Shaw, 8 months ago
I like the yin and yang quality of this – I always say that each door that closes allows another to open.
kimwild, 8 months ago
Lovely, nicely put!
Ivor Tetteh-La..., 8 months ago
very true
Yilian, 8 months ago
Thats very beautiful!
David Haviland, 8 months ago
Great tempo in this and sadly the words are true. But lets hope that we all have more of the first lines then the second.
shanghaiwu, 8 months ago
this is wonderful/ straight from your head/how awesome/ it makes me weep!
Shadowxx, 8 months ago
I really like this, it’s very well written =)
Gr8teful, 8 months ago
This is beautiful, it’s like a modern Ecclesiates! Awesome!
FuЯЄIyA Fisher, 8 months ago
i cryed
C.C. Arshagra, 6 months ago
For every inspiration found
There lives the give that’s gone
Jen Whyte, 6 months ago
Such naked truth in this!
red addiction, 5 months ago
hello, Im new at all this and i just discovered this piece of work and it is a piece of work. I liked it because i felt it. Great writing!
frostyjw06, 5 months ago
Awww, this is such a great poem! I love it!
Gingerberry69, 3 months ago
this is an interesting piece, i like the whole good and bad comparison..very nice!