Free Falling

Kristy Lee
Author: Kristy Lee
Word Count: 50
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Free falling…you touched me.

A fellow leaf from another tree,
destined to meet on a journey
of togetherness, strength and tenderness.

An ever embracing duet,
creating a soft sonata.
Forever you’ve left an imprint on me…

My warm, gentle leaf
Who dances right through my life,
Singing your sweet melody.

Free Falling

A gentle leaf swaying in the breeze and touching my heart.

  • Mark German

    Mark German, 11 months ago

    Just wonderful, Kristy.
    I love your writing.
    Such emotion and depth.

  • LisaG

    LisaG, 11 months ago

    Kristy, this is so gentle, I find this poem very peaceful…

    Lovely Writing…

  • Kristy Lee

    Kristy Lee, 11 months ago

    Thanks Guys!! Hope you are feeling good and having a nice restful afternoon Lisa (((HUGGGS)))

  • David Haviland

    David Haviland, 11 months ago

    Beautiful, simply beautiful.

  • Basil

    Basil, 11 months ago

    I think the same as David, beautiful, simply beautiful. Let’s have some more!

  • Suzanne German

    Suzanne German, 11 months ago

    Kristy – this is heavenly – what a gentleness you have that is articulated so well and so skillfully! – i really love this piece!

  • demon

    demon, 11 months ago

    Miss Kristy…this is lovely, Your writing makes it things so easy to visualise.

    Top shelf ..again

  • Louise Cooke

    Louise Cooke, 11 months ago

    In a busy, stressy day, I just read this…thanks for putting some calm and beauty in my day :)))

  • Kristy Lee

    Kristy Lee, 11 months ago

    awww thankyou all.

    And, Louise, you are very welcome..hope the day improves!

  • DarrellMoseley

    DarrellMoseley, 11 months ago

    YOUR WORDS ARE A BEAUTIFUL EXPRESSION OF YOUR SOUL! FREE FALLING, is like honey that you can taste while you read. I love expression in almost any form, but yours is special because the way you think! I am glad you have joined us redbubblers, and I look forward to reading more of your work.

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