A million pieces again…
Crumbled, forgotten and left behind,
upside down puzzle pieces.
I am no longer in my body,
and I can’t put them
together again.
Hovering here, watching
her fingers slipping through
sharp metal
saviours,
slicing the prints
off her thumb.
Look now…
One is in her hand
glimmering- no longer ordinary,
one sharp corner
already stained,
she draws it across her skin.
The red flows through once more,
warmth turning cold
streaming
down my
arm…
And my puzzle is complete,
albeit a little torn.
LisaG, 3 months ago
Kristylove, this is a powerful piece of revealing parts of you…..
Love you dearly,
Your Lisalove
XOX
demon, 3 months ago
This is very deep albeit a bit scary to…
Hugggs and wubs…xoxox
Kym Breeze, 3 months ago
agree with demon deep and a bit scary,
wishing you love and happiness,
powerful writing,
hugs xox
Paul Louis Vil..., 3 months ago
Beautiful!
You had me visualizing all the way through! :D
Symmetry44, 3 months ago
Hmmm this piece is almost too telling if I read it right. I visualize bloodstained razor blades so I suppose you did a marvelous job here of getting your point across gorgeous lady.
I wish you didn’t write so well at times Kristy lol.
butchart, 3 months ago
a chilling piece…. so intimately written… takes courage to go this deep…........ bravo….....b
Vladimir Garci..., 3 months ago
sound ’s like them demons lay egg’s, in you mind ?,now they hatch and trying to break free .Now becareful play nice and keep up the good work.