Shall I recoil and deny that I, with much delight, would welcome once again the feel of your mouth upon my supple flesh. To have your tongue caress that secret place and rejoice in your enjoyment of my taste.
I will not! For I have resolved that none but truth should pass between us two. Yet, you’re content to let me ponder still – where your desires lie and have you had your fill? Or is it simply that you cannot confess that your thoughts have also lead you to that forbidden path and you still desire the feel of my flesh.
If so, then sweet, proud man, forget your righteous ways and let yourself feel free to tell the truth to both yourself and me.
For life is one brief passing moment and all that remains are memories we made of things we did and did not dare, but wish we had.
For in the scheme of things….
There are sins far worse than wanting.
Jessica Tremp, 3 months ago
so true
demon, 3 months ago
For life is one brief passing moment and all that remains are memories we made of things we did and did not dare, but wish we had.
How true Kristylee and a lovely piece to give peace…Hugggs xoxo
forget your righteous ways...okay I hear ya…bwahahaha
adgray, 3 months ago
STUNNING!!!
This could almost pass for a letter written back in medieval times [not sure if they indulged in oral though – they must have it was only the stiff upright Empire Brits who thought it dirty lol
But it flowed and read like a wife of Shakespearean times scolding a lover or husband :O)
Just excellent!!
I have an urge now to write a story around this ….. lol
Oh and I too love the 3rd last line and the last line … and the first and the …. lol :O)
Awesome stuff Kristy :O) Chookas! ♥
LisaG, 3 months ago
“For in the scheme of things….
There are sins far worse than wanting.”
So true….Kristylove, those lines remind me of the song Rizzo sang in Grease – There are worse things I could do…..
XOXOX
Jen Whyte, 3 months ago
Oh yes …. brilliant writing that hits right at the core
butchart, 3 months ago
this one is majic Kristy….. beautiful writing… beautiful truths….............thank you…..b
Brett Foster, 3 months ago
As honest and excellent as always!
anaisnais, 3 months ago
Nicely executed, but so often with those magical memories lie a result that then dictates the future…so long as we are aware enough that life goes on far further than just two people and protect ourselves accordingly – or else of course cherish that possible adorable memory left to make its mark!! Lovely write, that leaves you thinking – well done and thanks for sharing! ;)
Show, 3 months ago
well told and beautifully written
jcmontgomery, 3 months ago
“For life is one brief passing moment and all that remains are memories we made of things we did and did not dare, but wish we had.”
Epitomizes Carpe Diem perfectly. Well done.
Outdoors2, 3 months ago
Damn ! scratching my head and licking my lips !
Bowing M’Lady…;)
Taine, 3 months ago
Brilliant…..
your words echo so well the thoughts and feelings that many feel but are too unsure to express – sieze that day & hold on to it….till the next dawn at least
shaytay, 3 months ago
Love it! Miss ya Kristy girl! xx
Nicole Ryan, 3 months ago
I miss you writing ..
This is beautifully eloquent and so evocative.
Nicole Ryan, 3 months ago
*your
Vladimir Garci..., 3 months ago
so delecant I could almost taste your word’s good work” you be to poem what key be to lock!”.
DiscoverMe, 2 months ago
Lust (“want”) is only the 6th deadlist of the 7 sins (according to Dante Alagheni).
Pride (arrogant self-”righteousness”) is THEE deadliest of the 7—and comes before the furthest of the falls.
Russ