[4-17-09] Abandoned Building

MissAlexis
Author: MissAlexis
Word Count: 39
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[4-17-09] Abandoned Building

[4-17-09] Abandoned Building belongs to the following groups:

All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Crime Time, Nine Inch Nails Fans & Art, THE DARK CELL, Up & Coming Writers and Villains and Villainesses: The darker side...

I waited,
in the dark;
like a spider yearning for a fly.

and I swore I seen you there;
standing in the place where the streetlamps
shone through the broken windows
and stretched out in diamonds across the floor.

  • Antanas

    Antanas

    great

  • MissAlexis replied

    I’m glad you like it.

  • xstephens

    xstephens

    love the “brokenness” of the piece. The desire and disappointment. Very well done…

  • MissAlexis replied

    desire and disappointment: exactly.

  • gemini63

    gemini63

    You have expressed this so beautifully well done :)

  • MissAlexis replied

    Thank you very much. =:3

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