Food Chain [2-26-09]

This is a terrible web we’ve woven.

And it was I alone that ruined our relationship.

Now,
Our beautiful lives as spiders;
Stalking, catching, cocooning,
Sucking dry the flies,
Really only exists somewhere between dreams and reality.

  • Erika .

    Erika .

    wow, this imagery is so vivid. And the way you’ve compared your relationship to living like spiders is incredible. It’s really unique, never really read anything like this before. :)

  • MissAlexis replied

    Wow; thank you very much! That was quite a review you just gave my work.

  • Astoreth

    Astoreth

    Stunning writing…wonderful imagery!!

  • MissAlexis replied

    Thank you very much, this was the first piece I’ve worked on in a while.

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