LOST IN THE MIST

Author: Mishaal Sardar
Word Count: 147
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It was the frozen moment in my life
When my heart been near to died
And my soul was floating above the moonlit sea
At that time i was thinking bout you
And walking in the mist
The fog were siege me all around
You were walking along me
I wanted to see you in your hypnotist eyes
Your eyes weren’t shining for me
It was silence in your eyes

I wanted to hear you
I whispered your name in the silence
I wanted to casted the spell of love
There was just silence
And the fear
There was no any desire
There was only the frozen love
There was only frozen dreams
I couldn’t melted them
I lost my voice
I lost my dreams

I couldn’t had will to resist
i drifted away with the mist
i lost myself in the mist

LOST IN THE MIST

LOST IN THE MIST belongs to the following groups:

"Stream Crossings", 1 In The Beginning - Ancient Practices, All Things Poetic, Prose, Philosophical., Art Inspired by Dreams, AW Welcome Center, Back In Black, Beginner's Expressions, Bits and Pieces , Bridges, Cards - Best of the Best, Dearly Departed, End Times, Everyday Life, Experimental, Fantasy Art, Happy Haven, In the Pink, Live, Love, Dream, Melbourne & Victoria, Once In A Blue Moon, Out of the Blue, Out of the Past, Parallel Dimensions, Passions, Safe Haven, Something To Say, The Beginners' Corner, The Picture of Scripture, The Sensual Word, The Two Of Us, The Word Tree, Vibrant and Vivid Color and Writers' Market

KEITH R. WILL..., 4 months ago

i feel this poem
Mishaal Sardar in reply to KEITH R. WILLIAMS’s comment, 4 months ago

thanks PORASK! glad u like! :)
Snoboardnlife, 4 months ago

That is really good Mishaal
Mishaal Sardar, 4 months ago

Thank Snoboardnlife ! glad you liked it.appreciate your precious comments.
Tony Ryan, 4 months ago

When we truly feel connected to someone any blocks they put up can be devestating. I find that we must search deep enough into the love we feel for people in oder to own this connection. Then if they lose connection to themselves we do not lose our connection to them or ourselves.
Mishaal Sardar, 4 months ago

Thanks you Tony! I agree you are right .. we all have to need find deep love and strong connection .i appreciate you precious comments on work.
I m glad you like it.
iofthebeholder, 2 months ago

this piece has such a great flow and the ending seems so natural. the imagery is so strong. well done.
barnsis, 2 months ago

So sad yet true for so many, Good one.
Mishaal Sardar in reply to iofthebeholder’s comment, 2 months ago

Thank you so much iofthebeholder!
it means a lot!
glad you liked it.
appreciate you precious comments.
keep reading…
Mishaal Sardar in reply to barnsis’s comment, 2 months ago

Thank you so much barns!
glad you liked it.
it means a lot.
appreciate your precious comments.
you are such nice person.
hugz.