Labyrinth

She saw love
in a brooding silence
mysterious & threatening dark
where the time ended on a sombre note
right there..
she saw love
frightened
brooding and mournful eyes

melancholic
nostalgic
helpless panic
trembling
enternal tears of sorrow
quivered
speechless with rage
a shattered soul
and helpless
half burnt in the fire
She saw the darkness falling on path
eclipse was burning in her flesh
the tar of chaos was flowing in her veins

labyrinth
she was loved by you
a complicated paths of love
it is difficult to find your way through
beneath of the holy eye
loved beyond thought
loved beyond belief
love made she feel insignificant
they were caught in the storm and got drenched to the skin
on the path of the life
misted eyes
yield to temptation
a morass of lies and deceit
love looked at her apathetically
her devotion through yearning rises out of deep dark chasm up to deceased brightness with the power of life
affection flickered in your eyes
a flicker of hope
a flicker of doubt
love likes to walk around in bare feet
walking alone
silent
bare his soul
love was right beside
and wanted to glimpse of her
Shadows filled an empty heart
she felt, love was fading
He smiled at her, trying to take the sting out of his words


And he felt the sun was breaking in her eyes
burning and flicker
and her eyes were stinging from the smoke
her feeling absolutely shattered

it seemed, shadows were fading into the light
when routine bites hard
What if it’s lost behind words we could never find?
she won’t change her minds
she found love stay in fear and survive
but flickered in its own fire
she felt, love is the most beautiful
and believed!!
but a sting in the tail

  • Gregory John O'Flaherty

    Gregory John O...

    Well said. nothing is like the pain of love

  • Mishaal Sardar replied

    thank you so much greg my friend!!!
    its mean a lot..

  • Paul (Quixote) Alleyne

    Paul (Quixote)...

    Very well written and very visual imagery.

  • Mishaal Sardar replied

    thanks a lot Paul! and thank you so much favourite! :)

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar

    Oh, a magnificent piece…def fav!!!!!!!!!!!! xooxoxoxoox

  • Mishaal Sardar replied

    thank you so so much Sally my friend! it mean a lot!!
    glad you liked..hugs xxoo

  • jim marshal

    jim marshal

    You’re an amazing writer. This was full of intense images and sharp words.

  • Mishaal Sardar replied

    Thank you Jim!!!
    it means a lot!

  • Andrew  Wakelin

    Andrew Wakelin

    I love it, it has a great flow

  • Mishaal Sardar replied

    Thank you Andy!!!
    its mean a lot ..
    glad you like my friend..

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