dormancy
What lies beneath? its awesome!
Andrew Wakelin thanks for giving me nice pic!
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i hadn’t a narrow escape
the surface of my mind is pitted with craters
erupts
the volcano could erupt at any time
Ash began to erupt from crater
a demon boiling inside, throwing into fiery pit
all memories scars had pitted my brain’s surface
during the peace of mind the thoughts lie dormant in the soil of silence
many thoughts sank beneath the waves
and many thoughts sank on its maiden voyage
couldn’t find the clear voyage psychic
I found my mind buried beneath a pile of thoughts
i considered such memories covered by beneath a blanket of dust
I dusted some ash from my mind
for the remind, i dusted off some of my archaic memories

the confusion
deep depression
what lies beneath?
proliferation of ignorance
the fear
tempers began to fray
a build-up of tartar
I banish it all into the depths of my unconscious mind,
sometime our careful make-up hid the signs of age beneath
and i wear ed the mask of smile
I covered my face with it
and nobody could see
what lies smile?
What lies beneath?
sometime we couldn’t find the truth behind the lie
a barefaced lie
I’m invisibly shaken with fear
And quietly breaking’
Desperately taking’ one breath at a time
Beneath this composure
but sometime
I had a sudden sinking feeling in the pit of my mind
and I couldn’t throw up all sort of debris on the shore*
we delivered the sermon with fiery passion
but we were thrown into confusion by the thoughts
we may talk of beautiful things but beauty itself is abstract
The name is Abstract don’t confuse without description
life who I used to do my clues with
subliminally this is me, I couldn’t assume
another path while I tarnish life
The half forgotten memories were tarnished and dusty
and the mirror had tarnished with age
I wish never superstitious breaking mirrors with the pitches
heart preaches the word of God
My religious belief was aways hedged with doubt
heart preached to the congregation about forgiveness
a proactive approach
phenomenons
besides ,can I rap about real life vision?
can I rap on the door of life?
I never found the missing piece
success lies a struggle that’s what most of my all are missing
struggled for breath
the struggle between good and evil*
the rise in inhumanity was just one symptom of the poor state of the world
were we telling us that these symptoms were just figment of our imagination?
man’s inhumanity to man
the inhumanity of the world
we greedily welcome the fires to grow
and we spent the seconds of our lives
Imagining, dreaming of the fear in the eyes
what lay behind this strange outburst?
I heard sounds of a desperate struggle in the world
we clung to the edge in a desperate attempt to save humanity
regain our composure
we were fighting a desperate battle to save the world’s life
we maintained our composure despite a desperate desire to alive
our heart of decay spreading, infecting, cutting,
Through the fabrics placed together,
Standards of morality seem to be dropping
our decision was based on ignorance and prejudice
racing and splitting each other
racial prejudice
there is growing unrest in the world
the unrest erupted into revolution
who has won?
who has died?
beneath the remains
There lies beneath its shadow but on the further side
let the world go by to know they want gain or loss
I could not, by any stretch of the imagination, be called peace
Spinning through the mind
A hopeless defense against all in which Pandora has released
Combining with the never resting limbs
An infinity of ecstasy
do our soul is under a curse?
maybe it figment of my imagination
but i know one thing we will not fall into this hole escape
As a child we would often escape into a dreamworld of our own
dreams
hopes
peace
world without fear
we are humanitarian
and we have concerned with reducing suffering and improving the conditions that humanity live in
A inner voice was praised for us courage and humanity
there is now hope of cure
there is still a glimmer of hope
Ushna Sardar
its utterly awesome Mishi! great flow love this!!
Mishaal Sardar replied
Thank you sweetie pie!!!
xoxoxoxox
Jared Revell
wonderful piece of writing Mishaal !!
Mishaal Sardar replied
Thank you so much Jared!!!
its mean a lot!
glad you liked
huggles
Andrew Wakelin
Wow what an honour to have my work made a part of this wonderful creation, such an absorbing piece.
Mishaal Sardar replied
Thank you so much Andrew!!
it means a lot!
appreciate your comments
i m glad i could do justice with your pic.
barnsis
So many great, deep lines and thoughts but my fovorite is “there is still a glimmer of hope”
Mishaal Sardar replied
Thank you so much Byron my friend!
glad you liked.
its mean a lot
amarica
A mind can reach to the farthest distance beyond the stars, get caught in a flood of conflcting images, be torn by indecision and gather into one place all that matters then lose it just as quickly. Garnering the fruits of the mist we nourish the soul upon the seeds that remain after the dust is long gone away….hugzzzzzzz
Mishaal Sardar replied
Thank you so much hunnie Ann!!!
glad you liked!
appreciate your comments!
Amber Elizabet...
You are an Outstanding writer x
Mishaal Sardar replied
Thank you so much hun Amber!!!!
glad you liked!
it means a lot
appreciate your precious comments.
Sally Omar
Mishaal …. What an awesome collaboration…Bravo to you both!!!!! Hugs, Sally xxxxoooo