Patches Of Hope

she was waiting for a glimpse of her love
a fascinating glimpse into life in the love
to find true happiness
her eyes shone with hope
the few patches of the happiness
there were few faded happiness there in her eyes

All colour had faded from the sky
the dreams had faded in the sun
her smile faded






she has faded dream in her eyes
hopes of reaching an agreement seem to be fading away
her voice faded to a whisper
All other happiness fade into insignificance compared with the struggle for survival
the survival of the love
love had faded its all shades
red faded into blue
blue faded into black
nobody knows where gone love true
Summer was fading into autumn
glimpses of loneliness
nothing more to do
she’s having hope in her eyes
she was waiting for winter to melt into spring
walking a lonely beach
she was singing the song of the love




her voice fell to a whisper
it was moon night
alone moon on the sky
A shadow fell across her face
the thought that she could have helped more preyed on her mind
summer had come and fall into fall
Autumn had come and the leaves were starting to fall
and now she’s waiting for winter
when winter will come at her place
and winter will melt into spring
then few new hopes will bloom
new happiness will have blossom

  • Gregory John O'Flaherty

    Gregory John O...

    Nice one Mishaal

  • Mishaal Sardar replied

    Thank you Greg!!!
    glad you likedmy friend!
    appreciate your comments.
    huggles

  • barnsis

    barnsis

    Beautiful words. the abstracts fit so well Great work.

  • Mishaal Sardar replied

    thanks byron, glad you liked :)

  • Snoboardnlife

    Snoboardnlife

    Very beautifully done. I missed you, I was wondering where you’ve been

  • Mishaal Sardar replied

    thanks Sasha! good to hear from you *:):) glad you missed me .. missed you too and all other nice friends! :) been busy with life .. now I’m here! thanks for reading and comments! :)
    hows you been? you been up to much? whats new? hows life? :)

  • Snoboardnlife

    Snoboardnlife

    You’re welcome.

    Hey glad to hear things were good. I’ve been just doing the same stuff.

  • Mishaal Sardar replied

    good to hear that you been good Sasha :)

  • Snoboardnlife

    Snoboardnlife

    Do you use Myspace?

  • Mishaal Sardar replied

    No, I dont! only msn and yahoo!
    do you?

  • Snoboardnlife

    Snoboardnlife

    Yeah I use Myspace, and yahoo

  • Andrew  Wakelin

    Andrew Wakelin

    This is such a special piece of writing for me and I know you will understand why!

  • nancyames

    nancyames

    It’s so great to see such a creative combination of poetry and art – really a treat.

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