Elude

Mishaal Sardar
Author: Mishaal Sardar
Word Count: 480
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a small mistake
we managed to give lie the slip by hiding behind a wall
nothing is completely certain until it really happens because things can easily go wrong
slipping towards
One slip and we could fall to our death
we forget our norms
we forgot truth
forget to do it
It completely slipped our mind
to make a careless mistake
with the propensity
madness
insane
it showed a propensity for violence
we tends to exaggerate the difficulties
we have a propensity to exaggerate
People tend to think that the problem will never affect them
but we are scare
tethered
stretched tightly
we are apprehensive
showing that we are anxious
tense
a voice taut with anger
we refuse to face reality
we’re out of touch with reality
our decision reflects the realities of the world situation

The fearless world is still far from being a reality
will time travel ever become a reality?
Outwardly we seemed confident but in reality we felt extremely nervous
In reality, human beings and danger never live on earth at the same time
one will die
and other will survive
we are helpless
we can’t do anything
actions that are very stupid and possibly dangerous

we have the harsh realities of life
we were found not guilty, by reason of insanity
insanity
we couldn’t trace the route of the peace on the world’s map
tomorrow
today
yesterday
the day before yesterday
All our yesterdays had vanished without a trace
Yesterday’s peace are today’s war
yesterday’s powers are today’s weakness
yesterday’s harms are today’s dangers
the day before today
Yesterday was tomorrow
and yesterday was our past
but today is our
today is our concern
today is our problem
the humanity today face a very difficult future at peace
we can think what to do
we can do what make our today
can we look on the bright side?
Do we have any bright ideas?
can we make a bright day?
a bright morning
a bright future
our eyes are bright with tears
we all are in the same boat
we having thoughts in our mind
and that thoughts walking beside us
we aren’t alone
we all have to need think like one
just think bout peace
just think about humanity
you can make your today
a place of ideal happiness
state of perfect happiness
paradise
delightful place
full of peace
full of love
you can avoid today

if you will avoid
or escape from that
to escape the understanding
perception
especially with the senses
our perception of reality
visual perception
appreciation
critical notice
evaluation
opinion
as of a situation
we had no appreciation of the problems we faced
we have to need
sympathetic understanding
a sympathetic listener
sympathetic ear
if that eludes us
to elude capture
then we couldn’t able to achieve it

  • barnsis

    barnsis

    I AM OLD. Not ancient but by young people’s standards I am old. The future of my world lies with the young people who are going to be making the decisions and taking the actions that will affect how the world continues too function during the rest of my life. I do not envy these young people; their ability to affect our world will be much harder in this time than it was in mine. Each of us needs to do everything we can to help the youth we will come to depend upon.

  • Mishaal Sardar replied

    Thank you so much barnsis!!!!!
    well said! but you old ppl assest for us..
    you are like academy we can learn a lot from your experience, very few people really understand the problem..We all learn by experience
    glad you liked it!!!!
    its mean a lot.
    so nice of you my friend barnsis!
    huggles
    appreciate your precious comments.

  • Andrew Wakelin

    Andrew Wakelin

    so full of your passion and commitment

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