Madness- Sense Of The Chaos

Mishaal Sardar
Author: Mishaal Sardar
Word Count: 325
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In the pitch of the dark
I was walking in your landscape

out of my mind insane

furious with anger

I was absolutely furious at having been deceived.

I was furious with myself for letting things get so out of control
I’m furious that I wasn’t told about it
I drove off at a furious pace
A furious row broke out last night after it was revealed that hundreds of prisoners thoughts had been released early from mind !
tell me I’m mad

you’re a fine one to decide

I’m here waiting a long

Help me paint a picture

my thoughts burning me in the fire of wild heaven
I know that it will never would stop

I know I’m always falling off the edge of the world

like a mad an energetically

I’m thinking bout the situation ..

I’m thinking bout the humanity ..

I’m thinking bout the disorder

I’m thinking bout the races..

this job is driving me insane

I’m insanely jealous to those who didn’t have mind

who didn’t have thoughts ..

cause I have strong emotions..

I could hardly believe the evidence of my own senses

the mixture of good and bad sights, smells to lie and truth and sound of violence around me made my senses reel

I felt an overwhelming sense of loss

a strong sense of purpose ..

I wish i could get helmet who can give cyclists a false sense of security

I had the sense that he was worried about something

worried bout the world current situation

worried bout wars

worries bout the murder of the humanity

I have lost all sense of direction in my life

i want to smile

but heavy snow of the thoughts has caused total chaos on the roads of the minds

all thoughts have frozen

that I’m losing my brain
there ’s meaning of the madness
sense in the chaos

  • nkbellani

    nkbellani

    come…rest my darling…we are amongst our own…we left that world behind…we’re one of a kind…

  • Mishaal Sardar replied

    Thank you so much N kumar!
    glad you liked it.
    it means a lot.
    appreciate your precious comments my friend
    huggles

  • theyellowfury

    theyellowfury

    I know what you mean. Remaining sane is mostly a pain.

  • Mishaal Sardar replied

    thanks Simon! :)

  • Tony Ryan

    Tony Ryan

    Dont think we can ever think so much so long as the thought is related to what we feel and is geared towards making sense of these feelings. I believe some feel more than others and therefor must think more in order to understand all the extra stuff they feel.

  • Mishaal Sardar replied

    thank you Tony! you are really sweetheart!
    HUG

  • barnsis

    barnsis

    So intense, so sad, Good work.

  • Mishaal Sardar replied

    thanks byron!
    hug

  • cbrook

    cbrook

    Intense emotion; intensely described …

  • Mishaal Sardar replied

    thanks Chris! glad you liked!

  • Ozcloggie

    Ozcloggie

    It always seems as though everyone else is in perfect control of their world…....

  • Mishaal Sardar replied

    thanks Ozcloggie!
    it means a lot!

  • Andrew Wakelin

    Andrew Wakelin

    I’m insanely jealous to those who didn’t have mind

    who didn’t have thoughts ..

    cause I have strong emotions..

    Reading this made me think of all those times when I’ve felt overwhelmed and oppressed by my thoughts and wished I could turn them off.

    Then I read this:

    i want to smile

    but heavy snow of the thoughts has caused total chaos on the roads of the minds

    all thoughts have frozen

    that I’m losing my brain
    there ’s meaning of the madness

    and then it seemed as if your writing was personified, as if it knew me, as if it had searched out my heart and discovered its innermost secrets.

    i want to smile

    but heavy snow of the thoughts has caused total chaos on the roads of the minds

    all thoughts have frozen

    that I’m losing my brain
    there ’s meaning of the madness

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