Apocalypse- divine intervention

Mishaal  Sardar
Author: Mishaal Sardar
Word Count: 329
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(Narration Part-II)

I closed my eyes and drifted away.
the great spark of light, I saw God was sitting next to me.

I asked, ’’I’m from the ninth circle of the earth”
He said,’’ I knew it.’’ he was wearing bright
I asked, ’’can you do me a favour?’‘
God said, ’’ what do you want’‘
I said,’’ I want to sell my soul.’‘
God said,’’ what for?”
I said.” I want to purchase a thing’
God asked, ” do you want some power.’‘
i said ,’’ No, power has gone always in a wrong way.’‘
God said.’’ do you want some money.’‘
I said,’’ money is only a greed, I won’t to be a selfish. nor I have lots of personal interests! It is totally cause the destruction of the civilization.’‘
God asked ,’’ then what for.’‘
I said, ’’ For love’‘
God asked. ’’ what for love’‘
I said,’’ I want to purchase some love for the nation and for the earth as we have lost love”
God said,’’ what else you haven’t there.’‘
I said ’’ I want to purchase some ethics and norm. I felt eyes are empty cause we have buried values alive’‘
God said,’‘human ain’t allowed to sell soul. you should know it’s a world about hope and faith’‘
I asked,’’ then what to do? could you help me?”
God said,’‘yeah, I’m looking forward to it, I have to have think of it seriously”
“what are you thinking?”
God said, “believe, hope, love, divine law and divine intervention!”
I asked, ’’ how about an environmental apocalypse”
God said,’’ It’s really serious matter, really disappointed.’‘
I asked, ’’ so it’s the end of the world, as described in the Bible
a situation causing very serious damage and destruction.’‘
God said,’‘I can arrange the key to life which can open every heart’s door and love is the major key to life and I’m offering it to you without paying”

  • barnsis

    barnsis, 2 months ago

    Really like your closing line, Great thoughts and sentiments. Good work.

  • Mishaal  Sardar

    Mishaal Sardar in reply to barnsis’s comment, 2 months ago

    thank you so much byron! so nice of you my friend. it means a lot! hugz

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar, 2 months ago

    an excellent piece!!!! well done!

  • N Kumar Bellani

    N Kumar Bellani, 2 months ago

    very well expressed…the deeper meaning goes very well with the theme…life!...all life that we know of…has it’s roots in the Sun…I believe…

  • Mishaal  Sardar

    Mishaal Sardar in reply to Ushna Sardar’s comment, 2 months ago

    thanks hunnie! xox

  • Mishaal  Sardar

    Mishaal Sardar in reply to N Kumar Bellani’s comment, 2 months ago

    thanks N Kumar!
    glad you liked! it means a lot!

  • theyellowfury

    theyellowfury, 2 months ago

    I read it there earlier. Nice work as always. Its a bit trippy this time.

  • debteraI

    debteraI, 2 months ago

    a sense of peace at the conclusion of this piece…..relaxing

  • sacofuba

    sacofuba, 2 months ago

    The language is simple to understand and that alone will catch the interests of many. I love this kind of poem. keep it up.

  • Mishaal  Sardar

    Mishaal Sardar in reply to theyellowfury’s comment, 2 months ago

    Thank you so much Theyellowfury!
    it means a lot!
    glad you liked it.
    appreciate your comments.

  • Mishaal  Sardar

    Mishaal Sardar in reply to debteraI’s comment, 2 months ago

    Thank you so much debteral!
    glad you liked it.
    appreciate your comments.

  • Mishaal  Sardar

    Mishaal Sardar in reply to sacofuba’s comment, 2 months ago

    Thank you so much Sacofuba!
    glad you liked it.
    appreciate your comments.

  • Masked Mistress .

    Masked Mistress ., about 1 month ago

    Very well written,
    Thank you for the pleasure of being able to read you wonderful art.

  • Mishaal  Sardar

    Mishaal Sardar in reply to Masked Mistress .’s comment, about 1 month ago

    Thank you so much Masked!
    glad you liked it.
    it means a lot.
    appreciate your comments.

  • webart

    webart, about 1 month ago

    This is noice!

  • Mishaal  Sardar

    Mishaal Sardar, about 1 month ago

    thank you webart!
    glad you liked.

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