Eternal Bliss

Mishaal Sardar
Author: Mishaal Sardar
Word Count: 136
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the darkest night
I’m walking in the rain
alone …
heart..
tumbling inside
life faded away
broken dream
frozen love
frozen eyes
silence
a echo ..
I’m escaping from
some voices chasing me
in the shadow of forgotten memories
raining in my heart
my senses are deteriorating
i’m broken down devoid of hope
lost faith
begging for mercy
forgiven for my Inquisition
I’ve been offering my soul
eyes have been closing
darkness is calling
I have allowed gloom to swallow my life
fear is gripping my soul
the enormous deep sound of silence is deafening me
as my paralyzed soul cries out for half forgotten memories
my mind is reminded all those golden memories
closing my eyes
drifting towards eternal bliss

  • Larry Varley

    Larry Varley, 6 days ago

    Beautiful Mishaal, your phrasing is coming along very well, keep up the great work!

  • Snoboardnlife

    Snoboardnlife, 6 days ago

    Very beautifully written!

  • Mishaal Sardar

    Mishaal Sardar in reply to Larry Varley’s comment, 6 days ago

    Thank you so much Larry!
    so nice of you
    glad you liked it!
    appreciate your precious comments.
    keep reading …

  • Mishaal Sardar

    Mishaal Sardar in reply to Snoboardnlife’s comment, 6 days ago

    Thank you Sasha!
    glad you liked it.
    appreciate your comments.
    keep reading…

  • Snoboardnlife

    Snoboardnlife, 6 days ago

    Anytime Beautiful!

  • Metamorphosis

    Metamorphosis, 5 days ago

    absolutely beautiful Mishaal! such amazing flow to it….

  • barnsis

    barnsis, 5 days ago

    Well done, so soulfull. I like “enormous deep sound of silence have been deafening me” as I like silence often times.

  • Mishaal Sardar

    Mishaal Sardar in reply to Metamorphosis’s comment, 5 days ago

    Thank you so much metamorphosis!
    it mean a lot.
    glad you liked it.
    appreciate your precious comments.
    :)

  • Mishaal Sardar

    Mishaal Sardar in reply to barnsis’s comment, 5 days ago

    Thank you so much barnsis!
    it means a lot.
    glad you liked it.
    appreciate your precious comments.
    yea true we like silence often times ..
    keep readin ..
    thank you for your support.
    so kind of you.

  • Mishaal Sardar

    Mishaal Sardar, 5 days ago

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