Time won’t stand still against my will
Another birthday ahead
Another year to add
Life is more precious than ever before
Now there are little grandchildren
That I adore
Time won’t stand still against my will
I look in the mirror
I notice the changes
And with each birthday
Age advances
Time won’t stand still against my will
I smile at the twins
So exited to grow
They do not know
Time won’t stand still against my will.
Renate Dartois.
AlteredIllusions, 6 months ago
Such a poignant reflection, Renate!
George Link, 6 months ago
There is no “time” it’s so hear and now…so I do agree..time won’t stop…till we see…
jamiewinter, 5 months ago
so excellent, Renate
Rusty Woodward..., 5 months ago
This is excellent Renate! I love the theme of time. I like the narrative style and the gentle rhyhming scheme. Great work. Let’s see more! Loved it!.
Steven Torrisi, 5 months ago
Time may not stand still but your beauty grows as what you create stands still in time.
Susan Epps Oliver, 5 months ago
Very touching write, Renate…...well done !