Blue Faith

My love, I know you care, you love me true

Life is hard; I have taken a long time
You, others don’t see heartfelt prime

Follow and tolerate my journey bleu

My love I feel your pain, not exactly fair

This… not our parents’ lives, now our own
It was all different then, now alone

Fathom my mistakes, still fighting there

No one gets my fight of fame and fortune

Broadened boundaries, expanded hope
To work with me, all times, tolerate, cope

Expecting the impossible portion

Readjusted beliefs, constant abide
Reap my harvest with me, you must decide.

This is another type of poetry, A Petrachan, 14 line sonnet. ABBAABBACDDCEE octave rhymings.

I am a seasoned musician who enjoys writing poems, lyrics and heartfelt prose with dark, gritty poignant analytical deepness. Intense overtones. Well thought out intentions. I love simple things – drawing, Sudoku, playing left-handed guitar and drums. Constant writer.

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  • Donna19
    Donna19almost 2 years ago

    Congratulations! Constant motion is life my friend. Nice reflective work

  • Thank you, thank you, some people want you to be your best… yet they won’t go on the journey of success and failure with you…. how fair is that??


  • Arco Iris  R
    Arco Iris Ralmost 2 years ago

    Wow You have a lot of going on in here, but I guess that is the story of life, may things going on, things that happen to make you what you are and also constantly changing. What really amazes me is how you got all of those words, meanings and putting it up in this form of poetry. I don’t think I would be able to do it. Congratulations on your feature.

  • Than you very much my friend… it is the tatters of life fulfilled and yet to be fulfilled… pain buids us up as much as it tares us down.. character is manifested…..


  • Donna19
    Donna19almost 2 years ago

    It is wrong and your wake up call. Sadly they want you to fail…

  • Amazing…. sometimes these are your best friends……. it’s got to be jealosy… thanx for the comment Donna…………


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