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BEEN THERE
Let me in… says you
The problem is you don’t get it
Stress, tension, mistakes I do
No one understands, not a bit
I’m not that unusual, I am a man
My life consists of supply and demand
When things are good, I am a grand ole soul
When things are bad, I can live in a hole
The ignorance of friends is, cool when I buy
When there are issues, am broke, I can die
Amazing, so amazing things are…
Life seems so simple until you catch fire
The unique of being so different
Making others look at you will smiles of relent
Just to fit in and be normal
I know I am so rare and informal
I do as I please, yet help in a flash
My life is so changeable
Help, live, and crash
Irreconcilable, disputable, attainable
Let me get in… says me
Funny how no one gets this
Pride, honor, image manage to be
No one understanding, you lose and you miss
BEEN THERE by MINDSET
Tongue in cheek memorandum, do people care that we care, that we are concerned, that we feel for the trama in the world…???
I am a seasoned musician who enjoys writing poems, lyrics and heartfelt prose with dark, gritty poignant analytical deepness. Intense overtones. Well thought out intentions. I love simple things – drawing, Sudoku, playing left-handed guitar and drums. Constant writer.
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“I’m not that unusual, I am a man
My life consists of supply and demand
When things are good, I am a grand ole soul
When things are bad, I can live in a hole”
This so reminds me of my husband. I tell him all the time, I wish i could crawl in your head and figure you out! He’s always in his head and i always feel the need to “sit down and figure it out”. I guess it’s our differences that make it interesting. :)
If that is the way, that you would want to climb in his head to figure him out… or try to… That is ‘awesome ! You are one of the few… BUT; the big problem is most women… really most people – our family and friends, ’don’t, They desperately think and say – the man IS so foolish and coping an attitude, an ignorant cry for help showing his weaknesses. He can die if he thinks me or anyone will help him…. that is the heavy pain… unfortunately. THANK YOU FOR YOUR GENEROUS COMMENT.
– MINDSET
I’ve ‘been there’ too. Yes, life is not that simple after all, and anything can change in a flash. Once smiling then one day joy is gone – thanks for the comment on my poem by the way.
I find it hard to understand what to do from one moment to the next, you can only do what ‘you’ can do… we are what we are… we can try and keep the faith and do our best… Thank you for the awesome comment… I like deep and meaningful / mindfull writings and readings!
– MINDSET
Wow! Really loved this beautifully deep and honest dive. Just a wonderful work of art. You weave your words with such feeling they are a pleasure to read.
Thank you so much, it is a pleasure to write for and to those who understand my deep, empathetic nature and believe that life will endure.
– MINDSET